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-- Lyn Lord (LynLord@aol.com), April 09, 1999
Lyn-A valiant effort. I can see what you were trying to accomplish with this shot, but it just doesn't seem to work. Uh, I think part of it is because there seems to be some lack of detail in a few shadows.
I also think that if there were more contrast, maybe it would be a little more jumpier.
Good try though!!
-- Jason Fobart (jason@fobart.net), April 09, 1999.
This is potentially very nice, what I think has decreased the image's effectivness here the the almost black areas on both sides of the middle. I hope your original has more detail and open tones there.Frank
-- Frank Kolwicz (bb389@lafn.org), April 09, 1999.