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Nikon CP900 digital camera. 35-mm equivalent settings 38-115 @ 115 mm, macro mode. 1:6.0, 1/96 sec.
-- Garry Schaefer (schaefer@pangea.ca), June 04, 1999
Very nice shot. My only comment is that I would have cropped square.
-- sheldon hambrick (shambric@us.oracle.com), June 04, 1999.
I agree with the comment on the square crop.Otherwise, an asymetrical crop would seem more effective. But, since this appears to be a full frame shot, you can crop it later.
Nice work!
Nice to see your stuff again.
Keith
-- Keith Clark (ClarkPhotography@spiritone.com), June 04, 1999.
I agree with the square crop, but you need the flower offset. That way the needles will form nice lines leading the eye back to the subject. This is a composition issue at shutter time and I would have offset it then and it would have came out quite nice in the rectangular format. Is it possible with you camera to get more, just a tad, of background blur. That way the needles would be isolated from the flower and still give a nice line to the flower. Of course, you probably can't go back and get the same flower again...
-- Chris Gillis (cagillis@concentric.net), June 05, 1999.
Very beautiful, did you handhold this or was your camera tripod mounted ? Did you post a larger version somewhere ?
-- Jan van Bodegraven (janvnbdg@mandic.com.br), June 05, 1999.
Thank you all for your input. Although I don't have a large file posted, I do have this and four additional shots of these flowers, including both female and male parts, up on my web site. All shots were hand held. The fifth is a square-cropped, offset version as suggested. The set can be found at URL http://www.pangea.ca/~schaefer in the section entitled "Spring is in the Air".
-- Garry Schaefer (schaefer@pangea.ca), June 05, 1999.
Just perfect.
-- Charles Dias (deepblue97a@hotmail.com), June 07, 1999.