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http://www.geocities.com/madscans/photos/ibi.jpgOlympus C-2000 Digital camera
-- Colin Lam (sashmusic@excite.com.au), June 22, 2001
I think the shadow is too harsh. It would be better if you wait for couple hours until the sun is low. The leaves on the left is seems annoying to me. You might need to work on the composition a little bit. And I just notice that there are some white birds on the tree. Use of longer lens will make the composition better and helps to eliminate some unnecessary objects on the background and lead the eyes of the viewer to the birds.
-- Poniman Mulijadi (pn_photo@yahoo.com), June 23, 2001.
All the birds are ibises.
-- Colin Lam (sashmusic@excite.com.au), June 23, 2001.