Among The Tallest Trees.....Original Poem

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Among the Tallest Trees

I took a walk outside today to see what I could see, I lingered in the sweetest breeze among the tallest trees

My eyes gazed upon a massive trunk and continued to the top, the gentle breeze picked up a bit and the leaves began to drop

I stood in silent wonder as I watched each one prance, floating, spinning, twirling in unison they dance

Bright mounds of yellow and orange lay silent on the ground, then once again the breeze picks up and spins them all around

Suddenly they dance again as they are hurled into the breeze, looking for their place of rest among the tallest trees

Kathy Jo Phillips

Copyright 2002

-- K Phillips (Philli@Peoplepc.com), April 03, 2002

Answers

Very nice work, soothing....

-- Kristean Thompson (pigalena_babe@yahoo.com), April 03, 2002.

I agree with what Kristean said.

-- Bren (wayoutfarm@skybest.com), April 03, 2002.

thank you for sharing your beautiful poem.

-- billie schneider (canyonkaty@hctc.net), April 03, 2002.

Kathy, that was wonderful. Reading this made me feel like I was watching it happen. Thank you.

-- Terri in WV (mrs_swift_26547@yahoo.com), April 04, 2002.

Kathy, that is sooooo pretty, thank you!

-- Trendle Ellwood (trendlespin@msn.com), April 04, 2002.


"In the name of the bee and of the breeze, and of the butterfly, Amen." Emily Dickinson

-- paul (primrose@centex.net), April 04, 2002.

Very Pretty.

One of the wonders of the Fall season that I enjoy experiencing living up north after growing up in Florida is what you have just descibed so beautifully.

-- Lav, Central Maryland (lavenderbluedilly@hotmail.com), April 04, 2002.


Wow. Peace. Real world. Thank you.

-- Susan in Northern Lower Penn Michigan (cobwoman@yahoo.com), April 07, 2002.

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