Half asleep, I have yet to awake, life is blurred, not much more to take

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When life is blurred
And reality is surreal
When a heart is broken
And a soul cannot feel

When a mind is lost
When a body is tired
When the blood is thin
When the nerves are wired

Sleep never comes easy
The habit keeps you awake
Long nights of nothing
Nothing to fake

Your eyes are shot
The light has faded
Life holds nothing
'Cept memories jaded

You sit alone
Within your chair
Wondering what
In life is fair

Addictions got you
By the throat
The drug warms
And lets you float

But what once was
Now must end
For this body
Is without a friend

Its only nourishment
Came from a shot
And now its time
To end the rot

One frail body
Can only take so much
One sickly mind
No longer has the crutch

When options run out
And choices divine
When life is meaningless
You draw on the line

When emotion is lostBR> And feelings are gone
The desire to die
Begins to dawn

Life holds nothing
So I bid it adieu
To everyone in it
I love all of you

Just try to remember
Before I leave
The message is simple
The message we weave

Its not drugs that kill
Nor guns, nor booze
Its simply addiction
To whatever we chose

But before you give your body
So some product of earth
Remember my message
And take measure its worth

It was never the drugs
That drove me insane
But the addiction got me
And caused my pain

One body can only take so much.

But first, long before that, the mind falters.



~KC~ 2002

-- Anonymous, July 19, 2002

Answers

KC if this is a suicide note then don't do it. If it is not then nice writing.

-- Anonymous, July 19, 2002

Dude, don't commit suicide. Don't be like Kurt Kobain or that guy from Alice in Chains or DeDe Ramone. Don't do it. I have no respect for people who kill themselfs. Life has a lot of adventures. Lots of paths. Some paths are dead ends and have no return. Suicide is one of them. But if you go the other way and continue on with life, think of all the things that could happen. You could have a family, have kids, become a millionare, and other things. The point is don't kill yourself and live the life that you were ment to live. But if it was not a suicide note then okay.

-- Anonymous, July 19, 2002

Said like a true poet KC.

-- Anonymous, July 19, 2002

You idiots (not you AP). That aint a suicide note, its just a poem that I wrote. Well, obviously, it does the trick because it actually sounds like a suicide note (it should) and its nicely depressing. I have no intention of killing myself, I just write depressing poetry, thats all.

I AM NOT DEAD. Thankyouverymuch.

-- Anonymous, July 19, 2002

Do you have a place where you have posted more? That is a great poem.

-- Anonymous, July 19, 2002


Nope. I was just sitting around bored last night and began writing. Hence the poem.

-- Anonymous, July 19, 2002

that was a verry good poem......its relly depressing though..put good......so there

~poof~

-- Anonymous, July 19, 2002


Not bad, not bad at all.

-- Anonymous, July 19, 2002

Indeed a teriffic poem... but my message is not to you it is to Trowa... FUCK YOU Kirt Kobain didn't commit suicide... He was Murdered. by his Girl Friend the little bitch courtney love. if you really think he did commit suicide then answer me this how could someone with 3 count them 1,2,3... lethal doses of cocain in his system put a shotgun in his mouth and pull the mother fuckin trigger??? not possible. so don't ever say another word about him or Nirvana cause i will kill you.

-- Anonymous, July 20, 2002

Okay I won't say anything bad about them. I like their music.

-- Anonymous, July 20, 2002


DAMN STRAIGHT

-- Anonymous, July 21, 2002

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