Just One Kiss

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The seat creaks as the wind blows it, causing it to rock back and forth, that rocking always makes me tense, we're so very high. I look out from the top of the Ferris Wheel, feeling the man beside me, the body heat is making me wet. I breath softly, hoping we never start moving again, hoping he and I are stuck here forever now, if only...we could stay here for eternity. The moon catches my eye and distracts me, a shaddow passes across its silvered face and I gasp, moving closer to the silent warmth beside me. His strong arm drifts up and across my frail shoulders, drawing me into a soothing embrace, and I breath deeply of his masculine scent. I shiver, and he thinks I'm cold, I bless the gods as he pulls me into his lap and wraps his large denim jacket around me. My head falls to his shoulder and my eyes open, looking at his tanned neck, longing to kiss that beloved skin. I subconciously raise my arms to slip them around his chest, my slender fingers trailing over the cotton t-shirt, that feels like silk against his granite form. I close my eyes and revel in the feeling of security, and the slow fire that is flaring in my gut, spreading through me to make my skin tingle. I long to tell him what he does to me, and has done to me for as long as I can remember, but I'm sure he would be disgusted, and rebuke me. I can't help thses feelings, the lust that causes me to shudder in my sleep, and forces me to fantasize while my hands do things they ought not do. Sitting here, in his lap, knowing what is nestled 'neath my rear, and longing to have it nestled elsewhere. I take a deep breath, trying to cool my suddenly burning skin, and my head tilts back, I imagine he kisses me now. What is that?...Oh, my sweet madness, I can feel his lips, so strong and yet so tender upon my own. My eyes open some and I nearly swoon as I see his own mere centimeters away, he is kissing me! My lips part, and I feel the first, hesitant probing of his forbidden tongue, and my lust takes over, driving me to suck his wriggling appendage into my mouth. I can not control myself as I nibble, and suck upon his tongue, lost in my fantasy, he is my fantasy lover. We are both lost, and nearly too late realize the ride is moving, I am suddenly beside him again and then we are out of the swinging seat. I glance up at him demurely, then slip my small hand into his, gripping it gently and smiling at him, the taste of his lips forever burned into my memory. We don't speak, and I know there is no need for words....we walk away and to the car...Daddy drives me home.

-- Dawn (darkdeathanie@hotmail.com), July 21, 2002

Answers

Unsettling trent with...with the incest...yeah...I think maybe my nex...yes...new idea.

-- Zero_6ix (Zero_6ix@hotmail.com), July 21, 2002.

Cool. I think it needn't be interpreted as incest, but it seems likely, you naughty girl...*L*

-- Cam (wikked_which@hotmail.com), July 21, 2002.

I didnt like this one as much as Zeros. Not as creepy, not as... "organized". Good start tho.

-- KillerCrud (killercrud@hotmail.com), July 21, 2002.

If I knew it wasn't just writing, I would be truley scared of you people... supprise ending though... quite sick...

-- ArchPyro (ZemoruePyxil@aol.com), July 22, 2002.

It was good. But i disagree with ArchPyro. The ending wasn't a suprise. I knew he was her dad when she said he pulled her into his lap and put his jacket around her. That's why i like zero's a lot. You couldn't tell that he was her brother and she was six until the very end.

-- FC (.@..com), July 22, 2002.


Hmmm, yeah. Guess I didn't catch onto that... wonder why.

-- ArchPyro (ZemoruePyxil@aol.com), July 22, 2002.

I like it, because of the girl point of view... it's great.

-- Kant (kant@kant.com), July 22, 2002.

*blinks* Eeeew....sick....I love it! *grins*

-- Angel (keita@my.sanguinus), July 25, 2002.

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