Does anyone like this

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I was wondering if anyone likes my poetry here let me show you............ We,we are nothing but jumping colors of leaves falling gentley down an emty path that leads to emtyness.Sorrow yes,simpithy of course,happiness no.We have the need to feed off of happiness though it never stays with us which is why we are filled with guilt.Nothing is in the air it is on the ground it is everything but yet it is no where.What are we,we are not human nor are we inhuman but perhapes we are both.We are bran new leaves just falling off a old but beatiful tree and as we fall down a emty road of nothing that leads to no where we age and what do we die for nothing,exactly what we live in.Sorrow fills the air and we breath it in as we become it.What do we live for nothing and what do we die for nothing the same thing that lives among us.What is to become of us but nothing.What should we do with our lives nothing.We think we have greatness and truth and happiness but we don't,so what do we do we have.certinly not any of those what can we do with our lives what will become of us and everyhting else are we close to becomeing anything or are we getting close to becomeing nothing at all.No one nor nothing can answer any of our questions.So what do we do with ourselves that is something we will never know unless you try your hardest to find out but will you wate you whole life on tring to find out.WE will never know but the main question is would we want to?

Well does anyone like it?

-- Anonymous, May 19, 2003

Answers

I didn't really read it, just skimmed. But you should really fix up the typos first.

-- Anonymous, May 19, 2003

Well,it some spelling checks and some clen up but other than that its great.I like do you have anymore of your poetry?

-- Anonymous, May 19, 2003

Well i took many of hours looking at it and thinking about it.I loved it you are really good you express feelings in this like you are becomeing the person,and I really like that in a writer you should make more and e-mail it to me.

-- Anonymous, May 19, 2003

Some of these seemed liked the same person.

-- Anonymous, May 20, 2003

i started to read it but to be honest i couldent be botherd to finish it,sorry!

-- Anonymous, May 29, 2003


Awesome poetry. You bring up questions that have troubled me on more than one occasion. Keep it up, very enjoyable poetry ^^.

-- Anonymous, June 04, 2003

good, very good (i like to keep things short and sweet) :)

-- Anonymous, July 21, 2003

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