Could you please tell me what you think of this young lady...

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Name: (Princess) Akiri.

A.k.a.: There are some but I just go by my name.

Origin: A forest somewhere in Makai.

Age: 300+ (appears 15.) Eye color: Amber. Hair color: Silvery white (it’s long, about to my waist and flowing.)

Background: I was born in a cave to the queen of the forest. I had no siblings…just my mom. I was very close to my mother. She taught me everything she knew and my love for life. She raised me by herself, giving every bit of energy, love, and devotion she possessed, to me. She was a Uni as am I, gentle and caring I was very much like her. I loved her more than anyone could ever know. She continued to raise me in that cave, until she thought I was old enough to return to the forest as the princess. When I was 24 that time arrived. All was revealed and we returned to the forest. This was a joyous day; there was much celebrating and festivity. The following months after our return were peaceful, the creatures of the forest taught were friendly and me many things. Techniques, morals, everything they had to offer while my mother trained me in my birth skills. My life was bliss.

But one day, my mother shooed me up into the clouds and told me not to come down. She seemed instant and urged me with a sense of rush. Unfortunately for me as I would later find out, I listened. Shortly after she left, a black shadow went under my cloud and over the castle. I sensed it was an evil presence and was worried, but stayed put. Seconds later I heard a bone chilling roar followed by a scream. I don't know how I knew, I just did. My mother was dead. When I flew back to the castle, no words could come close to what I felt.

Distraught for many years, I wept for my mother and out of pure hate for who did this... hate for my father. I always loathed him, even though I had never known him. I just had a sense that he was evil...my mother did not speak of him much when I was young. Grief and rage consumed me as I later read a note written long ago by my mother that revealed all about my father. My hunch had been right. He had wanted a son from her...but got me instead. We hid so he would not kill me. He vowed he would return and kill my mother for what she had done. She had known he was coming that day and saved me. A witness told me after he killed her and could not find me he fled. As far as I can guess killed himself for not finishing the task. He was dragon of some sort I knew…but that is all the witness could say before becoming terrified. I remained in the forest for who knows how long, when finally I cold stand it no longer. I gathered my mother’s heart pearl, two fangs of my fathers that had remained in her neck, and left to her grave on the cloud that had saved my life.

After, I left silently for the nigen world. I am currently living there as a 15 year old “model”. They cannot tell I am a demon, just an amazingly beautiful girl only the highly spiritually aware can sense my true presence and see my true form. Sometimes I return to my palace...to be at peace and visit my mother. At the moment I remain here on what the nigen call “holiday” thinking...visitors have come to stay lately and I am healing slowly. This is what you see…

To understand the rest, you must understand what I am. I am Uni. A young lady in appearance, 5 feet 8 tall, slender with long legs, and “breathtaking” as someone put it once. Ears of a horse the purest white and a long flowing tail the color of my hair. My skin is fair and creamy with soft pink lips. Two wings about six feet long that almost reach the ground come from my back. They can carry me for miles for hours on end without me becoming tired. Many also stop me to say that my eyes are comparable with Amber Orbs and shine with sincerity. Nigen cannot see my demon appendages to them I am just a young lady with white hair, Amber eyes and a strange mark “birthmark” on her forehead. The appearance of my purity can be deceiving although. I am a tough fighter when need be.

Special abilities: My beauty can be used in awe itself. Using hypnotism in my eyes, and cunning I can render males helpless. I search people souls and thoughts…using what I find to my advantage. I can also fly and walk on clouds sometime producing a small gust with a flap of my wings. Very agile in air or on land speed is a necessity. My horn that is immensely magical and can emit poisons and a wide variety of other things depending on the situation. I pride in my abilities with a bow as well. I have deadly aim and can harness my energy into an arrow. My most desperate attack is the Dragon’s Rage. It is when I become half of my father and my negative energy wins over my intelligence and peaceful nature. My mother’s pearl glows red and I become a savage creature with immense power and rage. It is like my Uni form only with dragon traits and features the blackest of night. A full mouth of razor teeth...two deadly sharp golden horns. Black and purple dragon wings replace that of the Unisys and a scaly black tail with a gold poison tipped spike. Claws emerge and my hair becomes deep purple with the most evil ruby ever imaginable. Yes, I can control this form...but I hate it with all my heart. It is only used when there is ABSOLUTLEY NO OTHER WAY.

Traits and features: My huge Amber eyes and cunning one fang smile is actually a weapon...to guys^_^ and a trademark of mine. I usually wear an elegant pure white silk dress that goes to about my knees and is puffy near the end. It has a silver sash and what nigen call a "V" cut and side straps, worn with small white slippers. But I love my archery outfit too. It really depends on my mood. Another trademark is my bow made from my mother’s horn that will never break. The most prized possession I own is the pearl from my mother’s heart; it is worn as a necklace along with two of my father’s fangs. One last trademark is the six pointed, black star on my forehead underneath my horn. (It drives nigen crazy.) These items can trigger the Dragon’s Rage.

Personallity: *Heeheehee* I have what they call a multi personality depending on who I am with or what I feel like. I can be obnoxious to flirty to serious to intense or just a "regular" nigen. Making friends either gender, I get very close. I am Loyal and honest, true and sincere. I mean what I say (when it really matters) and care IMMENSLY for my friends or anyone whom I respect, no matter how my personality may be a that moment...compassionate and intelligent I try to think before I act and not let my anger get the best of me.



-- Anonymous, August 12, 2003

Answers

I dont think anyone actually gives a shit.

-- Anonymous, August 12, 2003

Hmm... would you happen to have a pic of this young lady? (I don't think people like to read all that crap).

-- Anonymous, August 12, 2003

I concur.

-- Anonymous, August 12, 2003

*Yaaawns* oh! was I supposed to be listening? I got as far as the flowing hair thing...

-- Anonymous, August 13, 2003

ok alright i get the point.

-- Anonymous, August 13, 2003


i like it, it sounds interesting. the fact that you could make something up like that shows potential. don't listen to the other people.

-- Anonymous, August 13, 2003

thanks

-- Anonymous, August 13, 2003

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