Yes, incase you noticed, I DID post this before, but because nobody has helped me and nobody scrolls down far enough to see where I originally posted this, here it is again. Prepare to read...

'Kay, I've recently been reading lots and lots of what I once found evil, Doujinshii, online. Why did I think it was evil? Because I'm very "stick-to-the-plot-no-what-if-crap", I guess. I mean, I HATE it when my friend comes up to me and says stuff like "What if Radditz didn't die?" or "What if I made this new character and he came in and did this and this and this and this and..." and I smack him. Dragonball is how it is, and you can't change the story. Toriyama Sensei created this world, and I hate the "what-ifs". But after I read lots an lots of Doujinshii I began to love it. It's insanity mocks all that is Dragonball Z, but I've learned that this is cool now, thought I still smakc my friend when he says those retarded things. So I got the lamest, corniest idea than an Otaku could get-I'm an average, 16-year old American girl with only a little knowledge in the Japanese language and culture, but I'm gonna write my own Doujinshii! What's lamer is that I tried to make it NOT lame by reading right-to-left, and using all kinds of random Japanese words in it and my friends hate me cuz they don't know what they mean...Stupid dub fans...Why are they my friends? Anyways...To shut one of my retarded friends up I decided, "This is Doujinshii, so I can do the things that never woulda happened in Dragonball!" So here are my lame stories, in order (Story and art by me, and I'm actually very good drawing Anime, so the art isn't lame, just the stories and the fact that I'm doing this at all...): Radditsu no Fukkatsu (Radditz' Ressurection) Basically, Gokou gathers the Dragonballs and asks Shenlong if Radditz ended up in Hell, cuz he was killed by a demon (Piccolo). Shenlong says since Piccolo was really Namekseijin and not Demon, Radditz is in Hell, and Gokou acts like a retard. He wishes him abck to life, and Radditz tries to kill him again. He then wonders why he's alive at all and realizes Gokou revived him, and they become a happy family. Radditz requests to join the Z Senshi and Gokou says with a serious look on his face "On one condition", and Radditz says "Anything, Kakarotto! Name it!" Gokou says he needs cool clothes because Vegeta's bad style makes them look bad. Radditz falls down. Pikkoro Daimaou no Suimetsu?! (Defeat of Piccolo Daimaou?!) Stupid. I wrote this story a few years ago, and finally illustrated it in all its retarded glory. Takes place during Gohan's Desert Training in the Saiyajin Saga. Piccolo believes since Son Gokou is dead (and by his hand no less) he will rule the world and nobody can stop him, not even "The great and powerful monk Kuririn". Kuririn sneezes, and decides to get revenge on Piccolo. That night, it's a full moon. Gohan and Piccolo are sleeping, and Gohan is dreaming of pineapples that look like Radditz (Yeah, stole dat from the Anime). Kuririn will get Gohan to look at the moon, go Oozaru, and kill Piccolo. Kuririn realizes the moon is gone and is about to leave. However, Gohan senses his presence in his dream but thinks it's an angry evil noseless chestnut (incase ya didn't know Kuririn's name is a pun on chestnut). He wakes up and Ki blasts Kuririn, who's head now glows. Gohan goes Oozaru (yes, I also ripped the "Kuririn's head as the full moon" thing, from the 22nd Budoukai) and crushes KURIRIN instead of Piccolo, Piccolo points and laughs, and Kuririn is upset over all of the re-used puns and storylines. Told ya it was stupid. Boku no Konouena Nakama wa MANEKIN da (My Best Friend is a Mannequin) You won't get this at all, unless you've seen the commercial for Lucky Magazine a few years ago. I can't even try to explain it. If you DO know the commercial I mean, it's just that emulated EXACTLY, only with Vegeta, a male mannequin, and Gokou in the role of the husband. If you have seen this commercial please respond to this thread so I know I'm not the only one (besides the fact that I loaned the tape I taped it on to all my friends and forced them to watch it...It is the most hillarious commercial ever. EVER.). Vegeta wo KENNI wo Korosu (Vegeta Killed Kenny) Yes, I do love ripping off everything that I get my hands on. Easily one of my favorite non-anime cartoons is South Park. My retarded one-page gag of a dead and bloody Kenny on the ground, Stan yelling "OH MY GOD! VEGETA KILLED KENNY!!" and Kyle's "YOU BASTARD!", as Vegeta angrily holds out his arm for a Big Bang Attack at the other boys. Stan and Kyle look at eachother, Stan saying "He's scary dude!" and Kyle's "Don't let him hear you!". Yes, I am an idiot. That's that. (...I have no title for this one...) OK, this is gonna be a GOOD one. Why? Because my friends are helping me with this story...But it ain't done! Which is why I posted this thread in da first place and am only getting around to explaining this now!!!!!!! I'm just a totally random person. Be lucky that you don't know me. THANK GOD YOU DON'T KNOW ME, MINNA. In detail, here is my script for this. And may the Lord bless you for having the pacience to read all the crap I've written so far. Also, as you may have noticed, everytime I, Suupaa Gohan 2, post ANYTHING on the internet is is 10x longer than what other people post, cuz I'm random and I never get to the point. I'll shut up now. OH I FORGOT!!!!!!! To get this you'll need to know I once wrote a fanfiction in which Radditz had a full-blood Saiyajin daughter Tanip (Tanippu, pun on Turnip, Taanippu). You don't need to know the fanfic (besides, it was my stupid humor at work and if you've been reading all the crap I've written so far you've noticed I have a very unusual sense of humor, which is why I love Furi Kuri (FLCL)... (Atop of Sky Palace, Vegeta, Gokou, Gohan, Trunks, and Radditz stand there in the Saiyajin Armor.) Vegeta-"OK, Radditz, Kakarotto, myself, and our sons can all become Super Saiyajin. You need to focus hard, and push your anger to the max. Power is important, but you need the ANGER! Release it now!!!!!!" Radditz-"But what do I have to be angry over?" Gokou-"I know...Oh Taa~nip!!!" Tanip-"Yeah? What's up dad? You guys training?" (Vegeta sees her and his eyes become hearts. He leaps for her making grabbing motions. Radditz watches this in horror and Vegeta knocks Tanip to the ground, grinning, but before he can do anything...) Radditz-"GYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH MY DAUGHTER YOU TWO-TIMING BASTARD!!!!!!! DON'T YOU HAVE A WIFE?!!! AND BESIDES, YOU'RE MORE THAN TWICE HER AGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" (He freaks out first, then on the last "Kyaaahhh!!!" he powers imensely. Dust clears to see SSJ Radditz.) Gokou (Smiling happily)-"Yatta! Toldja it'd work! Yahoo, now we can all do it!!!!!!" (Radditz glares angrily at Vegeta) Vegeta (Nervously)-"O-o-o-o-ok! You've done it! Now you d-d-d-don't need the anger anymore..." Radditz-"Don't think you're getting off the hook that easily! HYYYYAAAAA--" (Chi-Chi walks in) Chi-Chi-"OK everyone, training's over for today! We've got to get going now! Radditz, you look cute as a blonde! Definately more handsome than Gokou-sa!" (They all fall over) (Now at the Son House, the guys get dressed up into good clothes (Not Saiyajin Armor)) Gokou (Putting on a tux)-"Why do I gotta wear this?" Chi-Chi-"We're going to a party and I'll not have you wearing that tattered orange Gi again! Besides, you look handsome in that tuxedo!" Gokou (Under his breath)-"Yeah but not as handsome as Radditz grumble grumble..." Chi-Chi-"What was that, Gokou-sa?" Gokou-"N-n-n-nothing, dear! What's this party for again?" Chi-Chi-"Geez Gokou-sa, how many times do I gotta tell ya?! Lunch just showed back up and Tenshinhan proposed to her! They're getting married this fall and we're celebrating their getting back together!" (Tanip walks in in a cat suit, they all fall down again) Radditz-"Tanip you're not wearing that!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now go put something decent on!" Tanip-"What's wrong with this?" (Radditz' eye twitches and he looks angrily at Vegeta blushing in the background) Radditz-"Well...We're going to a party, not a whore house, for one thing! Just change into something less slutty!" Tanip-"What if I WANT to look like a slut? Fine, I'll change! You just don't understand anything!!!!!" (She storms off and Radditz looks at her embarrassed) Vegeta-"Why'd you go and do that? She looked fine! You're going to my house and nobody cares!" Radditz-"She's 16! I don't wanna have her running around like a little whore!" Gokou-"Bulma usta wear a bunny suit when I was 12, and she was only 16 too. I don't get the big deal." Radditz (Yelling)-"Well you don't have a daughter! Besides, not everyone is as naïve as you, Kakarotto!" (Gokou looks confused, Radditz angry and blushing, and Vegeta sighing in the background) (Later they ring the doorbell to the Capsule Corp. And Bulma greets them. They walk in-everyone's there already, And as the angry Tanip walks by in the hall Master Roshi and Vegeta peek from a door) (Later at the table with the punch bowl Gokou stuffs his face with orderves and cookies) Gokou (With mouth full)-"These are great! Did you make them, Vegeta?" Vegeta (Angrily as Bulma walks by)-"Of course not, Baka! Do I look like a chef to you?!" (Bulma walks away, Vegeta leans in to whisper to Gokou) Vegeta-"Yes I did, but don't let the others know! Bulma doesn't want people to know her cooking sucks." And that's as far as I've gotten. Keep in mind that this is Doujinshii, NOT FANFICTION. I write the pathetic storylines I posted, and I am actually illustrating them, in the traditional right-to-left format (though the dialouge is English cuz I only know VEEEEERRRRRRY little Japanese...). The stories are little one to a few page chapters, just like a regular Doujinshii, however mine is the retarded kind that uses my odd sense of humor. And yes, GOHAN IS #1!!!!!!!! I cry everytime I watch his transformation to SSJ2, and Unmei no Hi~Tamashii tai Tamashii (The musical insert piece used in the background of dat scene) is my fave song of all time. So I think that answers all da questions u guys asked...NOW HOW THE HELL AM I GONNA CONTINUE THIS PARTY STORY?! I would apreciate any helpful suggestions. Also, it may be difficult for people who don't know who Tanip is, but basically she's just Radditz' rebellious 16-year-old daughter. Also a pointless side note- I love the Saiyajin tail, and despite the fact that all da guys had theirs cut off ('cept Radditz who died WITH his tail...), I always draw them with their tails cuz they're so damn kawaii! Trunks' tail WOULD be purple, right? And a Super Saiyajin's tail would turn blonde as well (cuz it does in GT, though I may hate GT with all my heart...But I ramble yet again...). Well, once again a response would be greatly appreciated, and list the name you would like to be called and I'll give all credit due to ya. Also if ya have an original (not too long!) story you'd like to contribute, I'd like that too, and you'd get all credit ('cept for my artwork).Really, the reason I posted this thread was to get help on this story. If I use your idea I'll give you credit for you're continuation, just list what you'd like to be known as when I write in in the Credits (Ex. I don't use my real name on the internet, I'm simply Suupaa Gohan 2). Well, any help would be apreciated with this and once again you have the pacience of a Saint for reading all of this. Itsu Ka!

-- Anonymous, November 18, 2003

Answers

.... too much said in one post, i read untill something about a Lucky Magazine ...

-- Anonymous, November 18, 2003

Wow, I'm not Japanese, but I think that stuff is pretty cool. And I think it would kick ass if you drew your own doujinshi because I can't draw worth crap. Some of that stuff seems it would be a laugh riot and it seems to be good stuff. I have one exceptionally good idea, (ask Angel_Goten) but it's verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry long, so you probably wouldn't be interested. In any case I'm won't be done writing it until next summer so, yeah. And I think that a Saiya-jin tail would turn gold when they went Super, again because of GT. But I have no idea what color Trunk's tail would be. I suppose it would be purple like you said but I think I saw a picture of him as a chibi and his tail was brown. But he would look very Kawaii with a purple tail, as if he's not Kawaii enough already. Him and Goten are super Kawaii and you should draw some doujinshi of them as chibis being Kawaii!! I'd buy that if it was good...

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 18, 2003

Cool! I like the story. Have fun making the doujinshi. I'm working on a manga right now. I've got the story and some of the characters drawn. It's harder than it seems though. Especially when you don't have alot of time. I know someone who is actually getting his manga published. I hope he gives me a free signed copy. ^_^ What materials are you going to use to draw the doujinshi? I would love to have the new Adobe Photoshop. It's very expensive though. As for ideas for your story, trust me, they'll come to you when you least expect it. But, help is nice too. Just make sure you like the idea. Don't write or draw something that you don't agree with. Hmmmm....I like this doujinshi idea so keep me updated. If you ever get published, I would definitely buy it. Ja.

-- Anonymous, November 18, 2003

Thanks fer reading it all! I'm happy that people like my idea. And when I say "Japanese DBZ fans", I meant fans of the Japanese DBZ and not FUNimation's crap, not fans of actually Japanese ancestry, but that wouldn't be bad to get cuz they prob'ly know a helluva lot more about Doujinshii than me, but sorry for the confusion. ^_^ It would be really wierd for Trunks to have a brown tail, but then again, the other Saiyajin had black hair and brown tails, but a purple tail is WAAAAAAYYYY more Kawaii. I'd love to hear your story, Yonk, when it's finished. As for what materials I'm using...I'm kinda poor, and I do half of this stuff during my Spanish class (SPANISH 3 IS REALLY REALLY HARD AND REALLY REALLY *REALLY* BORING!!!!!!!!), so it's all hand-drawn in pencil. I keep 'em in plastic folder thingies, so they don't smudge (I'm left-handed, tho, and my hand drags over everything I draw, even if it IS right-to-left format), and I plan to go over them in pen when I'm done. I'm assuming this is how most Manga-ka do it, but I'm really poorly educated on dat...The reason I've yet ta include those Kawaii chibi's is cuz my favorite saga is the Cell Saga, cuz Gohan goes SSJ2, and as ya can tell from my screenname and what I write after almost everything I post, I love SSJ2 Gohan VEEEEEERRRRRYY much. He's not very Kawaii, but is awesome nonetheless. Well I'm glad people are giving me feedback! If you guys could give me any stories or help me continue my current party story I'd apreciate it, and also tell people to come read this thread if they like Dragonball! I'm not selfish, though I may sound it, but I REALLY REALLY NEED HELP WITH THIS!!!! Until next time, Chibi's ARE Kawaii, and SUUPAA GOHAN TSU WA SAIKYOU TO BESUTO SAIYAJIN, SOSHITE, BESUTO Z SENSHI DA!!!!!! Itsu ka mata aeru hi made, Minna!

-- Anonymous, November 18, 2003

Yonk are you talking about your dbz chronicles? and ya ^_^" and that is cool

-- Anonymous, November 19, 2003

Actually, I only mentioned it. It would be hard as hell to make doujinshii out of the Z Chronicles, it's too long and complicated. Believe me it's hard to WRITE! It must be imposible to draw.

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 19, 2003

No problem! I'm really good at drawin' Anime (not trying to make myself sound cool or anything, but I am) and Manga peoplez so I'd love ta hear it! Plus I'm in Art II at my school, and it pisses me off when we draw people and my teacher says "YOU CAN DRAW JAPANAMATION!!!!" Uhg...I hate that word, "Japanamation"...It's just stereotypical...Well anyways...Today in my oh-so-boring Spanish III class I was doing what I usually do instead of pay attention...I was drawing a snowman in my notebook and writing "Almost Christmas!" everywhere (cuz I can't wait fer it, it's da best holiday ever and Thanksgiving sucks and I DON'T WANNA WAIT FOR CHRISTMAS ANYMORE!!!!...But I ramble again...). So when I drew Gokou in a Santa suit building da snowman it hit me...DRAGONBALL CHRISTMAS CHAPTER IN DA DOUJINSHII, SO I DON'T HAFTA WAIT!!!!!!!!!! Here's what I got, and if you guys could help with this too I'd apreciate it, but my first priority is finishing the party story...

It'll be basically Gokou starting to build an average snowman, and then Vegeta is jealous that Kakarotto's snowman is better than his so he makes...A SNOW VEGETA KILLING A SNOW KAKAROTTO!!!!!!!!! And he sprays...HAWAIIAN PUNCH all over the snow for blood!!!!!! Lame, yes...Anywho, Vegeta's snowman melts randomly and he is pissed, so he throws snowballs at Gokou's snowman. They all miss (huzzah) and Vegeta gets more furious, so he charges Ki into a snowball and throws it at Gokou. Gokou whines how it wasn't fair, and an all-out war of Gokou and Vegeta Snowball begins. Meanwhile...Gohan (also in a Santa suit...It's just so Kawaii! He's more Kawaii as Super 1, but way much cooler as Super 2, methinks...) goes up to Piccolo-san and tells him he has a Merry Christmas present for him...CHOCOLATE!!!! The happy-as-he-can-get Piccolo gets pissed and tells Gohan to come here...He says it was a sweet thing to do but...Then he grabs him by the head and throws him into a wall, saying "NAMEKSEIJIN DO NOT EAT!!!!!!! WE ONLY NEED WATER!!! IF YOU REALLY CARED ABOUT ME YOU WOULD HAVE KNOWN THAT!!!!!!" Poor Gohan- kun lies bloody on the ground with a "Pi...Kkoro...San...". Sorry I was so mean to my favorite character, but I thought it was funny...Prob'ly not, right? Well that's all I got so any feedback would be nice...GOHAN WA DAI DAI DAI SAIKYOU DESU!!!!!!!!!

-- Anonymous, November 19, 2003

ROTFLMAO!!! Oh my God, that is sooooo funny. You should do that, I would buy something as hilarious(sp?) as that! As long as it's not completely in Japanese, 'cause I can't read it. At least not that much. And TRUST ME it would take you many, many years to animate the Z Chronicles, It is going to be over 500 pages when I'm done. And that's if I make it shorter than I want. And If they ever made a movie it would be so CGI intensive that it would have a production budget of over the three Matrix movies combined. So unless you want to be drawing until you are old and losing your hair (Begin pointless singing: "When I get old and I'm losin' my hair, many years from now, DA DA DA DA DA, will you still be sendin' me a Valentine, birthday greetings, bottle of wine.) Sorry I listen to old Beatles songs waaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy to often. Anyway...you should write some Doujinshii (two i's?) about that crazy story I came up with. I would put it here but it's hella long too. A few pages probably but it's cool. Ask Angel_Goten. Basically the Chibis (Trunks and Goten) die and I go to hell to rescue them and fight Satan and Angel_Goten comes later and helps too and it would make a really cool Doujinshii story, it's a bit wierd but pretty cool. And Chibis are Kawaii and I'm out of ideas of what to say right now. So...ja ne!

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 20, 2003

First of all, forgive me fer not knowin', but what is "ROTFLMAO"? And you really think it's funny? I'm glad some people out there apreciate my wierd humor. Don't worry, I really don't know Japanese. I wish I could take a class, but I pretty much teach myself, and most of the Japanese I learned is from DBZ (duh) and my 112 Anime mp3's. I pretty much just use common Japanese Dragonball terms you'll prob'ly know (Like "Baka", "Chibi", "Kawaii", the common stuff. And I use "Otousan" and "Tousan" for Gohan and Trunks respectively instead of Father and Dad. I think it's cool to randomly use Japanese, but it's prob'ly not. It DOES read right to left, and the sound effects are in Japanese Katakana, but all dialouge is in my native language of English, don't worry. Is DBZ Chronicles that long? Sheesh! I'll forget it then...But I'm interested in the poor Chibi's goin' ta Hell (But WHY?! They weren't evil!!!!! Is being too Kawaii a sin?! I believe Bulma said that in Vol. 1 of the Manga cuz she couldn't ride Kintoun...) story, so post it! 'Course I'd need ta know what you guys look like so also give me a description so I can draw you...Anime style, of course!!! So I'll be talkin' to ya, cuz you guys all seem to respond to the same questions I do and of course we always get off topic, which is fun!! So Itsu ka, and Chibi's are Kawaii, Mirai no Trunks is hot, and GOHAN IS DA BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! See ya!

...Can girls lose hair cuz of old age?! I'm scared!!!!!

-- Anonymous, November 20, 2003

OK, first ROTFLMAO is "Rolling on the floor laughing my ass off" Also, you need some background info: I adopted Chibi Trunks and Goten, Angel_Goten has half custody too. And basically they are now my (our) Kawaii adopted chibi sons! YEAH! I even have a picture of them in my wallet!! And Trunks and Goten are not evil, they are in Hell because SATAN STOLE THEM!!! And me-sah vewwy PISSED! So here's the whole (3 part) story. It's very long because it written like a script. So enjoy, it's probably like 10 pages or something!

Yonk: "Trunks what is it?"

Trunks: "Um...you better come look at this..."

Yonk: "Nani?"

Trunks: "You did say you were training to be a doctor, ne?" Yonk: "Hai, but what's this about?"

Trunks: "It's Goten, he's...a bit sick."

Yonk: "Goten?...NOOOOOOOOO!!!! GOTEN!!!!!!!!!!"

(later)

Surgeon: "So, you say he ate how many tons of food?"

Yonk: "Trunks?"

Trunks: "Ummm, I lost count at about 507."

Surgeon: "Well, it's official. I don't know how this is possible for a Saiya-jin, but...he ate himself to death."

Yonk and Trunks: "NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! GOTEN!!!!!!!!!"

Trunks: "(sniff) It's all my fault, I told him I could eat more than he could."

Surgeon: "I'm sorry, would you like him to be buried or cremated?"

Trunks: "NANI!?"

Yonk: "BAKA! DON'T SAY THAT IN FRONT OF THE CHIBI!" BOOOOMMMM!!!!

(Half the hospital is vaporized)

Trunks flies home and retreats to his room where he painfully cries himself to sleep. Meanwhile Yonk carries Goten's lifeless body to Capsule Corp to be put into cold-storage.

Yonk: "Hey, Vegeta! Do you know where the Dragonball Radar is?"

Vegeta: "Now why in the world would I make it easier for you to wish back the second spawn of that baka Kakarotto?"

Yonk: "Because if we don't wish him back soon than Trunks won't be able to live."

Vegeta: "What do you mean? He's Saiya-jin and-"

Yonk: "He's half-human, and Goten meant a lot to him. If we don't get Goten back than Trunks will slowly die away."

Vegeta: "..."

Announcer: "So Goten-kun has died of eating too much and Trunks-kun will die as well without his best friend. Will Goten be doomed to spend the rest of eternity in the afterlife? Will Vegeta disavow the location of the Dragonball Radar in time for Yonk to wish back Goten and save Trunks? Find out tomorrow, when the pointless side story is continued!!!

Part Two:

Announcer: "And so, as a summary of yesterday's events we-" BOOM!

Angel_Goten: "I said, GET ON WITH IT!"

Announcer(a bit crispy): "OK, we now continue!"

(In Australia)

Angel_Goten: "Whaadya mean 'HE'S DEAD.'????"

Yonk: "...he's dead..."

Angel_Goten: "Why, you..." (Starts charging)

Yonk: (gulp)"Uh, it wasn't my fault."

Angel_Goten: "YAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!" (goes Super-Saiya-jin)

Yonk: "Well, if you want it that way...YAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!"

Windows shatter, ground cracks, buildings disintegrate, and mountains crumble, general destruction.

Yonk turns Super-Kalltorraiya-jin.

Angel_Goten: "Hey! I thought that was a just a story, and what does this have to do with Goten?!"

Yonk: (Surrounded with blinding green aura visible from the moon) "I don't know..."

WHACK!

Angel_Goten is knocked out cold by Gogeta.

Yonk: "Hey!"

Gogeta: "Come on, I only have 20 minutes left, and you said we would have to fuse to keep up with you, right?"

Yonk: "Right."

(Later)

Trunks: "..."

Yonk: "Come on, Trunks don't give out on me now, Gogeta will be back with the last Dragonball soon and then we can get Goten back."

At the sound of Goten's name Trunks' eyes brighten but quickly fade as he slips further into the hospital sheets.

Trunks: (whispers) "Goten..."

Yonk: "It'll be all right buddy."

Trunks: (whispers) "I'll see you soon...Goten..." (his eyes close)

The EKG quivers, pauses, and then flat lines.

A nurse slams her palm onto the Code Blue button, in seconds doctors rush in from all angles and try to revive Trunks. But it's too late; he has lost the will to live and has extinguished his own Ki with the kind of control only gained after years of training.

Doctor: (sighs) "Such a nice kid...what time is it?"

Nurse: "It's 12:03 AM."

Yonk: "Trunks..."

Doctor: "I'm sorry, but he just didn't want..."

Yonk: (Eyes quivering, hands balled into fists, electricity crackles about the room) "Get out..."

Doctor: "What?"

Yonk: (Enraged) "GET OUT, NOW!"

The doctor nods and rushes to the elevator, there is a muffled thump as a bolt of electricity severs the cable and sends the elevator crashing to the floor, the doctor smashed to bits.

Yonk: "No, my sons...it can't be... YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

There is a resounding roar and the hospital building from floor 29 up is suddenly blown away in a green explosion.

Yonk: "YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

The hospital collapses underneath Yonk as he floats in midair a gigantic mile-wide sphere of vibrant green energy spreads in all directions. As the shock wave moves on it crushes cars like toys, uproots skyscrapers like weeds, and disintegrates people with the force of several atomic bombs. And in the center of what could very well be Hell with a green hue...

Yonk: "YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

There is a final massive explosion, the hospital building and much of Downtown San Diego has been vaporized. A crater 10 miles wide has been made by the sheer force of Yonk's Ki. Trunks lifeless body lays on top of the hospital rubble; tough Half-Saiya-jin body untouched by the explosion. Across the county everything is in ruins as the remaining buildings fall to the ground, human casualties: 1.7 million.

Yonk: "My God, what has this day done to me...?”

Gogeta: (several seconds earlier) "Holy Shit, what a force, I think the whole damn planet is coming apart. What could create such a power?"

He sees the growing green ball on the horizon.

Gogeta: "Aw, CRAP! They went and pissed him off! What the?!"

POOF! Gogeta separates.

Goku: "Darn, the fusion wore off!"

Vegeta: "No time to worry about that Kakarotto, we have to get this last Dragonball to Yonk before he destroys the whole planet."

Goku: "Right."

Yonk: (sits on a rock, his back to Trunks' body) "They were the best things to ever happen to me, I can't wish them both back, I only have one wish..."

Goku: (Flies up) "Oh, damn. It's best to leave him alone for a while."

Vegeta: "Believe me Kakarotto, I know. He almost killed me before."

Goku and Vegeta fly off to Capsule Corp to tell Bulma.

Yonk picks up Trunks' body and Instant Transmissions to Capsule Corp. He places Trunks' body next to Goten's and closes the door.

Yonk: "You two mean everything to me, I will get you back, both of you. I won't need Shenlong, and may God have mercy on those who stand in my way."

Goku and Vegeta walk by and see Yonk by the door, in silence.

Vegeta: "This is bad..."

Goku: "You will get them back, won't you?"

Yonk: "Even if it kills me."

He flies at top speed to Australia.

Angel_Goten: "So, that was you, that huge Ki I felt?"

Yonk: "Unfortunately. While I'm gone you need to summon Shenlong and wish back all the humans I killed."

Angel_Goten: Where are you going?"

Yonk: "Hell; this was no accident, Satan himself took them from me. Now all I have to do is get them back."

Angel_Goten: "When will you be back?"

Yonk: "I don't know, but I will succeed."

He pulls a small device from his pocket and throws it to the ground, a portal opens.

Angel_Goten: "Oh my God, that feels horrible. Is that Hell?"

Yonk: "Yes, I must go."

Angel_Goten: "Well I'm coming with you."

Yonk: "No, it's too dangerous. If I die I will need someone to take care of Trunks and Goten."

Angel_Goten: "I dont care, I'm coming."

Whack!

Angel_Goten lays unconcious on the ground. Yonk stands, hand outstretched.

Yonk: "I'm sorry, I must do this alone."

Yonk steps into the portal and it closes with a flash.

Yonk: "May Satan be warned, nobody takes my Chibis. And lives."

To be concluded...

Part three:

Announcer: "Well in response to recent events Satan has gathered a massive army to defend hell against Yonk who is..."

Angel_Goten: (Charging a Ki ball) "Hurry up!"

Announcer: "...nowcomingtoHellattopspeedsowhydon'twejustcontinue... QUICKLY!!"

Angel_Goten: "Good!"

And so...

I had never thought about it, what hell was even like. I found out the hard way.

A portal opens and Yonk falls through.

Yonk: (hits ground) "I'm tempted to say...that just getting here was hell enough. Despite the fact I am probably going to die I feel fine! Heh, heh!"

Demon1: "So you come here to challenge Satan?"

Yonk: "Why else, baka!"

Demon1: "Then I am afraid that Satan is quite busy, you will have to turn back. Or face the consequences, I will kill you."

Yonk: "You and what army?"

Demon1: "This one..."

The demon pulls out a small device that he throws to the ground, 4 other demons emerge.

Yonk: (in a half whisper) "No one said this was going to be easy..."

Demon1: "There, do you want to give up or shall we show you the suffering that hell is renowed for?"

Yonk: "Hey, that's my line!"

Vegeta: "Actually brat, it's my line."

BOOM!

Vegeta's boots lie in a smoking pile of ash.

Yonk: "I TOLD you that I would take care of you later, it's now la-"

Choosing to wait no longer, Demon2 punches Yonk through a wall.

Yonk: "Alright you bastard, now you die!"

There is a huge explosion, Demon2 lies dead.

Demon1,3,4,and 5: "Aw, shit!"

Yonk stands, fully charged and ready to destroy.

Demon1 and 3: "FUUUU-SION-HAAAAA!!!!!"

Poof!

Demon4 and 5: "FUUUU-SION-HAAAAA!!!!!"

Poof!

Demon13 and 45: "FUUUUU-SION-HAAAAA!!!!"

POOF!!

Demon1345: "Ha! Now we will destroy you!"

Yonk: "Ok, that was the...most ridiculous thing I have ever seen!"

Demon1345: "Well, now. You die!"

Yonk: "You, like Angel_Goten, seriously need a new vocabulary."

Demon1345: "Bastard, we'll send you to Hell!!!!!"

Yonk: (sweatdrops) "Uhhh, we are in hell!"

Demon1345: "We don't care, we are invincible!"

Yonk: "I can't stand this."

Yonk powers up and faces off with the quadruple fused demon.

Yonk: "TRY THIS ONE!!!! KAAAAAAAA-MEEEEEEEE-HAAAAAAAA- MEEEEEEE...HA!!"

Demon1345 takes the full force of the blast and flies through a wall and into a smoldering lava pit.

Yonk: "HA, all to easy. I didn't even have to go...Super?"

Demon1345: "Ha! It will take much more than that to defeat us, we are already dead. You can't KILL us!"

Yonk: "Well, then let's do this."

Announcer: "And so the epic battle is about to start..."

Yonk: "Prepare yourself...YAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!"

SPECIAL ANNOUNCEMENT!!! Due to budget restrictions, this special effects intensive scene was actually never filmed. We now continue...

Yonk: " *gasp, gasp* What an exciting fight, I pity anyone who did not get to see it."

Demon1345: "Yo, baka I'm still alive!"

Yonk: "CRAP! I can't kill them!"

Begin flashback:

(Demon1345: "Ha! It will take much more than that to defeat us, we are already dead. You can't KILL us!")

End flashback:

Yonk: "That's right, I can't kill them!"

Demon1345: "Very well, then you die!"

Yonk: "Wait a second..."

Yonk reaches into his pocket and pulls out an oilcloth sack. He reaches in and pulls out a single senzu bean.

Yonk: "Here, CATCH!"

Yonk throws the bean, it lands right into Demon1345's mouth!

Demon1345: " *gulp* What the? Oh no! A ate it! AHHHHHHH!!!!! I'M LIVING!!!!! I'M ALIVE! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Demon1345 drops alive!

Goku: (watching in Baba's globe) "That was RETARDED!! Wasn't it Vegeta...Vegeta?"

Yonk: "So much for Satan's great, deadly army."

Yonk proceeds to the GRAND CHAMBER AND SATAN'S THRONE ROOM!!

Yonk: "Ok, what is this? Some kind of joke? That's no throne, it's a fucking glorified toilet!"

Satan: "It's a differant KIND of throne. I believe you are looking for these brats."

Satan pulls out a small ball, presses a button, and throws it on the ground.

POOF!!

The Chibis sit tied up and gagged on the ground!

Trunks: "MNNNNFFFF!!!!" (Translation: "GET US OUTTA HERE!!!!")

Goten: "MNNNN, MNNNNNFFFFFF-MFFFF! MMMMMMNNNNNNNFFFFF!!!!!" (Translation: "YEAH, TRUNKS-KUN IS RIGHT! AND I'M HUNGRY!!!!!")

Bulma: (shoves Goku aside to get a look at the ball) "That bastard!"

Goku: "Yeah, look what he did to our kids!"

Bulma: "Forget about that, did you see that ball he had, with them IN IT?!?! I HAVE A PATENT ON HOI-POI CAPSULES YOU STEALING BASTARD!!!"

Goku: "..."

Back in Hell...

Yonk: "You better let them go!"

Satan: "Fine, then they shall go!"

Yonk: (a little confused) "You mean you will let them go?"

Satan: "Yes, I will let them go! TO THE PLAIN OF NON-EXISTANCE!!!"

Yonk: "What?!?!?!?"

Satan: "YAAAAAHHHHH!!!!"

With a large Ki blast, Satan kills the Chibis. Having been killed in Hell, their souls drift helplessly into the Netherworld, the Plain of nothing-ness.

Yonk: (falls to his knees) "I have dreamed a dream; me and the Chibis living our lives together, in peace. Now I have transcended dimensions only to see that dream dashed before my eyes."

Satan: "HAHAHA! NOW WHAT, HUMAN FOOL?"

Yonk: (whispering) "I am not human..."

Satan: "What?"

Yonk: "I am a Kalltorraiya-jin, and I am not going to let you get away with this!"

Satan: "You would take on Satan himself for...for...for some disjointed souls that were once stupid little kids?"

Yonk: "I would do anything for them..."

Satan: "Then let's see what you got you pitiful..."

Satan stops short as he suddenly feels Yonk's Ki, rising exponentially with ever blazing rage.

Yonk: "You have pushed me too far! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

With a resounding roar that shook the very bowels of hell, Yonk transcended Super-Kalltorraiya-jin and reaches an unheard of level of power.

Yonk: (Flaming with green Ki) "Now we shall see who will laugh last." The fight went on for days. Each time Satan gained the upper hand, Yonk would strike back with equal force. Each blow was met with one of the same power, each blast was deflected and then returned.

Yonk: "It seems we are evenly matched."

Satan: "Not so, boy! I have been hiding my true power!"

With that, Satan began to alter the physics of the room. He would punch through portals that would hit their mark; absorb blasts like nothing at all; and shift shape to avoid any attack and strike back with extraordinary force.

Yonk: "Too much...can't win."

Satan throws Yonk to a wall and pins him there with several rings of evil Ki.

Satan: "You can't win boy."

Satan formes a long Ki sword and draws it back.

Satan: "Time for you to be reunited with your precious Chibis in the Netherworld!"

Satan thrusts the sword in a killing blow and just before it reaches it's mark...

BOOOOOOMMMMM!!!!!!

An explosion fills the room and a majestic figure emerges from the blasted floor glowing in full on Super-Saiya-jin.

Satan: "WHAT?!?!?!"

Yonk: (weakly) "Angel_Goten?"

Angel_Goten: "That's right!"

The lights dim, a spotlight falls on Angel_Goten.

Angel_Goten: "Defender of truth, protecter of justice. To protect the world from devestation...I am the pretty, magical soldier: SAILOR- ANGELGOTEN!!!!!!!!! DA-DA-DA-DUUUUUU"

Satan facefaults. Yonk would too, but he's pinned to the wall; he just sweatdrops.

Yonk and Satan: "...uhhh..."

Angel_Goten: "What's wrong? Whatever..."

She charges Satan, but even after turning Super-Saiya-jin 3, she is no match for Satan in his own world.

Angel_Goten flies into a wall.

Angel_Goten: "Damn this hair, it keeps getting in my eyes!"

Satan: "HA! HA! HA! You pitiful fools can't touch me!"

Angel_Goten flashes to level 4 but only stuns Satan.

Yonk: "Angel_Goten, we can't win. We have to fuse..."

Angel_Goten: "You have got to be KIDDING me!"

Yonk: "It's the only way."

Satan: "OW! That stung a bit and...OH SHIT!"

Yonk and Angel_Goten: "FUUUUUU-SION-HAAAAA!!!!!!!"

POOF!

Yonk and Angel_Goten fuse into a strange creature that is a full KalltorrSaiya-jin and is of...questionable gender.

Satan: "Uh, oh!"

Fused character: "I am niether Yonk nor Angel_Goten. My name is Yangel_Gotonk! And I am the instrument of your defeat!"

Satan: "Oh damn, this is bad!"

In less than a few seconds, Satan is destroyed by Angel_Yonk...no destroyed by Goten_Angonk...no it's Yonkle_Goten...no Yon...Ang...Got...onk...gle.........oh bugger! Satan is destroyed by whatever he? she?...IT! is!

Poof!

They unfuse.

Yonk: "That was...interesting. I had no idea that you wanted to marry Goten and do THAT kind of stuff on your honeymoon night!"

Angel_Goten: "Well I had no idea you were taking French Cooking so you could prepare 'Chibis de foie gras' and 'Jus de Chibis a la mode'!!"

Both Angel_Goten and Yonk blush slightly.

Angel_Goten and Yonk: "SHUT UP!!"

Yonk: "Well this is all great, but we still have to SAVE THEM!!"

Angel_Goten: "Oh crap, that's right."

?: "Ahem?"

Angel_Goten and Yonk: "WHAT?"

Trunks: "We're fine."

Goten: "Yeah, Trunks-kun saved us. He made talking dummies of us for Satan to blow up!"

Trunks: "Well, Goten helped too!"

But Angel_Goten and Yonk aren't listening, they rush up and embrace the Chibis!

Angel_Goten: "No, Goten, you are not leaving our sight again!"

Yonk: "Trunks, you too!"

Angel_Goten: "Well, that was fun."

Yonk: "Right, Chibis? Whaddya say we go home?"

Chibis: "YEAH!"

Yonk takes out the device and opens a portal back to the living world...

They four step through it and land back in San Diego, bustling as always.

Yonk: "Hey you fixed it all!"

Angel_Goten: "Yeah Shenron was generous!"

Yonk: "You do know that it's my turn to have the Chibis..."

Angel_Goten: "No way! You had them last time!"

Yonk: "It has been a week! It's now my turn!"

Angel_Goten: "IT'S MY TURN!!!"

Yonk: "NO IT'S MINE!!!"

Yonk and Angel_Goten get into a minor scuffle.

Trunks: "Hey Goten, wanna spar?"

Goten: "Sure Trunks-kun."

Yonk and Angel_Goten fight on while the Chibis spar, play, have fun, roll in the grass, and generally act like cute Chibis.

Yonk: "Awwww, look at them!"

Angel_Goten: "Awwww, how cuteeeeeee!"

Yonk: "They are so Kawaii!"

Next morning on a raft somewhere in the middle of the Pacific.

Yonk: " *YAWN...* "

Angel_Goten: "Glad we could compromise!"

Yonk: "Where are the Chibis?"

Yonk and Angel_Goten: "CHIBIS!!!!"

They streak off in different directions in search of the missing Chibis!

Meanwhile a small pair of hands reach onto the raft.

Trunks: "They will be so happy we caught fish for breakfast!"

Goten: "Where did they go?"

Trunks: "I dunno? Let's eat!"

Goten: "Trunks-kun, I don't ever wanna go there again."

Trunks: "Don't worry Goten, I will keep you safe. And you will keep me safe."

Later Angel_Goten and Yonk return to find the Chibis safely on the raft, full of fish and dozing in each others arms. Too tired to go home, and too entralled by pure chibi kawaii-ness to disturb them; all they can do is smile.

Owari! ^___^ !!!

Kawaii, ne?

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 21, 2003

WHEW!!!!!!! That took me a while ta read...It's Kawaii, but Super long...SUUPAA Nagai da...Well, I'll give it a shot sometime, but I need ta know what you two look like!!!!!! Just give me a description. I saw the most Kawaii pic I've ever seen of the Chibi's-Goten sittin' like he does a lot holdin' his shoes and Trunks with leaning on his head...CHOU KAWAII DESU!!!!!!!!!!!!! But still, HOW THE HELL AM I GONNA CONTINUE THE TWO WORKS-IN-PROGRESS I HAVE GOING?! YA GOTTA GIVE ME SOME IDEAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-- Anonymous, November 21, 2003

Cool! I got one too.It takes place in GT (Trunks the 28-year old faggot finally decided to confess his feelings to Goten) (Trunks flies to Gohan's house,kicks down the door and marches into the recreation room where everybody,including Uub,was) Trunks:Goten!I have to tell you something!!! (everybody stares at him)

Gohan:Damn Trunks!I know we're friends,but AT LEAST knock!

Trunks:Sorry Gohan.

Goten:What do you want to tell me,Trunks?

Trunks:That I love you!!!!!!!

(everybody is in shock.Uub suddenly stands up)

Uub:I knew it!

(Gohan glares at Uub.Uub chuckles nervously and sits down)

Gohan:What the hell Trunks!You know that's not right!

(Uub stands up AGAIN!)

Uub:You can't deny them their love!

Videl:Wait,shouldn't we hear what Goten has to say?

Gohan:Well,Goten?

Goten:I love you too Trunks!

(They kiss each other like Jack and Rose in Titanic.Everybody except Gohan cheers)

Uub,with tears in his eyes:It's a happy ending.

Gohan:OH,SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!!! YOU'RE ALL FUCKIN' WEIRD!!!!!!

(Gohan angrily walks out the house.Trunks and Goten soon get married and adopt a baby boy who turns into a faggot too.Later on that year,Gohan killed himself.Pan married Uub and they lived happily ever after...) THE END

-- Anonymous, November 21, 2003

Well...interesting. I am a big fan of Trunks X Goten yaoi, but...perhaps a less tragic ending. It might make somthing good. And Suupaa Gohan 2, I have NO IDEA what Angel_Goten looks like, you will have to ask her. I could describe myself, but myself in the story (and in The Z Chronicles) is 17 and I'm only 10. So I have no idea what to describe my Mirai self as. I can guess...tall: about 6 ft., thin: about 150 lbs., lightly muscled. Black eyes (yes, my eyes are black), brown spiky hair. Not too spiky, more like Gohan at the end of Z but not as long and without that one stupid spike that hangs down in front of his face, my hair is perfect! And that's about it. In real life my eyebrows slope downward exactly like anime and touch the top of my eyes when I get pissed, so you can have that too. And I really can't think of much else. If you buy some $10,000 software you can modify a picture of me now to look like I will in 7 years, but I don't think you have that kind of money. So that's the basics, what else do you need to know about what I look like? And one more thing, when I smile, I look kawaii, but when I smile showing my teeth and look a bit downward my eybrows slope down again and I look REALLY evil. Just so you know. And CHIBIS RULE ALL!!!!! CHIBIS!!!!

-Yonk ^___^

-- Anonymous, November 21, 2003

That should be enough for me ta draw you. I'll make you look Kawaii, but...Can I give you a fang? I dunno if you've seen Flame of Recca, but if you have I'm thinkin' about a fang similar to Kaoru's...But if ya don't know what I mean it's just one small fang that always hangs outta one side of your mouth. But I'll have to ask AngelGoten what she looks like...If you haven't, go back to the question I asked about "Favorite DB/Z/Gt Song" and see whatI wrote there...It's about a picture I'm drawing of the Chibi's and I don't wanna explain it again...

-- Anonymous, November 21, 2003

Yeah, that would be wierd, I'm supposed to SAVE the Chibis, not scare the living daylights out of them. Satan should have fangs though. And there is this guy that I see at lunch who has a fang JUST LIKE THAT!! It's really bizarre, but yeah ask Angel_Goten what she looks like and finish that kawaii Chibi picture.

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 22, 2003

It's one fang, and it's s'posta be cute ¬_¬ and I have a few questions I forgot to ask before-What the Hell is a Kalltorraiyajin? What does it make you look like to go super? AND WHY IS ANGELGOTEN SAIYAJIN?! That's screwy...But she'll have to have a tail!!!! In my world ALL the Saiyajins still have tails, cuz they're Kawaii!!!! And also keep in mind you may not be in San Diego or Australia, cuz Dragonball takes place in an alternate Earth. I'll just put you guys in random places on da map!!!!!! So I'll be seeing you!!!! Ja!

-- Anonymous, November 22, 2003

Angel_Goten is Saiya-jin, with a tail. I should have a tail too, brown like a Saiya-jin tail and I keep it around my waist like the Vegeta in the Saiya-jin saga. And sorry for the confusion; Kalltorraiya-jin is a species I made up for The Z Chronicles, it's basically half Saiya-jin and half Kalltorran (Yes, I invented Kalltorran too) anyway a Super-Saiya-jin has Yellow Ki and hair and eyebrowns and tail. And a Kalltorran has basically the same, except everything is blue: hair, Ki, eyebrows, tail. And therefore (or 'ergo' for you Latin buffs) a Kalltorraiya-jin has GREEN hair, Ki, etc. as a combination of both. Basically it's the same kind of transformation as a Super-Saiya-jin, but since there is no level past Super-Kalltorriya-jin 1, it's more powerful than a Super-Saiya-jin 3. And it's has the same effects, hair stands up, gets a bit longer and more spiky, turns green, the works; eyes don't change color though. And you can put us wherever, I don't think Angel_Goten cares. And I must ask Angel_Goten what she looks like, all I know is that she's short, but don't tell her that! I can send you a picture of me now, for whatever it's worth. But at least then you can see how cute I am! That is, if I can even find one...and Chibis are Kawaii!

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 22, 2003

Ahhhhhh...cuz Yellow and Blue makes Green...(Acts like a 3rd grader...) Well OK, then. I'll see if I can work with dat. And I WOULD ask AngelGoten IF SHE WOULD EVER COME BACK TO THIS THREAD!!!!!! If I ask her from another thread it'll seem like I'm one o' those people who keep asking "R U Hot? Send me a picture!", so I'd hafta ask her from here. Try to convince her to come back to this thread if ya can. And by the way, check your E-Mail cuz I sent the Kawaii Chibi picture I finished this morning!!!!!!!

-- Anonymous, November 22, 2003

Yeah, it was cute! And your E-Mail doesn't work...so I'll just put what I wrote here...

Anyway, that was one of the cutest Chibi fan art I have ever seen, you should draw more! And I would use it, but it's a bit big and I'm trying to stick to screenshots from the anime. And that one picture you had at the bottom is in my opinion THE MOST KAWAII TRUNKS AND GOTEN PICTURE OF ALL TIME!!! That was, as a matter of fact, the first picture I ever got for the background and it now sits prominently in the upper-left corner. And it's also the picture I have in my wallet. Yes, I have a picture of the Chibis in my wallet because I adopted them. And Goten told me a few days ago that someone gave him a load of food, but I didn't know who it was...now I do! And the background's almost done; I'll send it up tonight!

That is, if I can send it up...

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 22, 2003

Well DUH my E-Mail of dragonballz@aol.com doesn't work cuz it's fake. However, I don't wanna post my real E-mail so I'll e-mail YOU again with it, and we send Kawaii pics of the Chibi's to eachother! However, I don't have much...I usually get pics of SSJ2 Gohan, Mirai no Trunks, and lately all the pics I've been looking up are Doujinshii (It helps me make mine by looking how PROFESSIONAL Doujinshii is done, and by the way I think ya can spell it with 1 or 2 "I"'s, sorry I didn't answer that way back when ya asked). However, I DID find a nice Doujinshii with a few Goten and Trunks stories called Pao Pao Zousan. I can read Japanese ('Cept Kanji, and usually the Kanji in Doujinshii DOESN'T have Furugana, which is the Hiragana on the side to aid in reading) completely, but I can only KNOW what some of the words mean, even if I CAN read it. But even without knowing the stories clearly, the pics are still super Kawaii!!!! And I'm glad ya like my Chibi's-It's too frickin' hard ta draw on the computer and I don't have a scanner (cuz I'm poor)...

In other news...

I drew two pictures of you (Didn't start the story, just experimented how you;d look)-One in normal form (BUT YOU LOOK WAAAAAAAAY TOO MUCH LIKE BUU SAGA GOHAN!!!!!!!!!! I tried not ta, but it just came out that way...Gomen ne...And for your Super Kallata-whatever-it-is I made the hair SLIGHTLY different-And it also gets a bit longer in the back, like Recca Hanabishi but ya said you don't know Flame of Recca....hmmmmmm....But I ramble yet again...

Well I gotta finish my research of my English Project (1930's Golden Age of Radio), which is why I told my Mom I was going online...So I'm multi-tasking...Well talk to you later, and I'll see if I can get you my REAL E-Mail adress. Ja ne!

-- Anonymous, November 22, 2003

Shit...I hafta go to a party for my Aunt's Birthday tomorrow (Not that that's a bad thing...It might be fun, cuz I gotta watch all my li'l cousins and I like little kids) so I WON'T BE ABLE TO SPEND ALL DAY CHATTING HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And when I come home I gotta finish my stupid English Project...So maybe I can talk to ya'll early in da mornin'...Itsu ka mata aeru hi made...Ashita wa nai...

-- Anonymous, November 22, 2003

Well, Gohan in the end of DBZ isn't that bad...but I dunno, can't you make me look...more human? And how does the hair get longer in the back, that's interesting, did you give it a lovely shade of Turquoise- Green? Even though A Kalltorraiya-jin is more human looking except for the hair, but how the hell am I going to see what you drew of me if you don't have a scanner?! ARRRGGGHHH!!! And anyway I live in San Diego so that's 3 hours behind Mass. time. I tought you lived in England or something :P !!! But anyway it's now 11:00 PM here that will make it 2:00 AM where you are. I am on weekdays at about 8:00 AM to about 9:30 AM (your time). And on weekend nights (and all this weeks' nights, no school) I am on around 1:00 AM to about 5:00 AM (again your time) I dunno if you're even up that freakin late? But I'll send you up the Chibi background tonight. I suppose you will see it in the morning. I might be on tommorrow, but I'm not sure. And in the background, I do have pics of them super Saiya-jin because there was this one when they are SSJ and they have their arms locked together. It's really cute, I took it off of a website with a caption that read: "If it wasn't for their being little kids I'd say this would be a little bit of Yaoi!" I had to have it. I think I have a smaller version of that pic from Movie 12 on the golf green in there too, so kawaii!

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 23, 2003

Shit, I'm usually on in the mornings at the same time as you (Only on weekends cuz I gotta go ta school at 6:30 AM...), and I go ta bed at either 11:00 or 12:00, depending. So pretty much everything I write to you doesn't get answered until the next day...Actually, I have a satelite dish and we have West Coast channels fer some (Like Nickalodeon (SP?) 1 and 2), and come ta think of it they're 3 hours different (Like if I wanted to watch something for at 4:00 for example and missed it I could catch it again at 7:00), so I kinda knew that but I was being a retard...AND I KNOW!!!!!!!! I NEED A FRICKIN' SCANNER!!!!!!!!!! Maybe fer Christmas (WHICH IS ALMOST HERE!!!!!!!!!!!), or maybe I can try ta use the one at my school...And yeah, your hair is actually PERFECTLY turquois!!!! I colored it with a light green colored pencil and since I couldn't find my dark green I had ta use a blue...And it came out nice!!!!! But how can I make you look more Human? And yeah, the golf one is my second fave Chibi pic I have, but I coulda sworn that was from Movie #11...Well Movie #11 sucks anyways, though I do like the ending theme Dragon Power Mugendai. Ain't it screwy how ALL the Movie End Themes are by Kageyama Hironobu (with the exception of Movie #1 cuz it used the Detekoi! Tobikkiri Zenkai POWER! song that closes the show...HATE THAT SONG!!!!!!!!!)? Well I'll talk to you whenever then, but th time difference really sucks, ne? Well Ja Ne, and I'm curious about that Super Saiyajin picture too. Itsu ka mata aeru!!!!

-- Anonymous, November 23, 2003

Well, I sent you my SUPER-KAWAII CHIBI BACKGROUND!! So you should have it! And I know that the Golf Pic is from Move 12 because I have Movie 12, and not Movie 11. And everyone says that Movie 10 and 11 suck and I say: "Well Shit, they have THE CHIBIS in them so they can't be THAT bad. I'll watch them just to seey more Chibi Kawaii- ness!" And anyway, that's cool. It's really funny that you made me look like Gohan at the end of Z because a while ago I took this screenshot of Gohan from when he went SSJ 2 in the tournament thing and screwed with it. I made his hair green and his eyes glowing red and gave him an evil smirk and it looked really a lot like I wanted the as-of-yet uncreated Super-Kalltorraiya-jin 2 to look like! I'll send it up to you this weekend because it's on my mom's computer. But I just thought of it and it would make a really good model for my character. And I ALREADY look like Gohan, so it won't be much of a change!

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 23, 2003

Sorry, I wrote dat before I check my E-Mail...MY GOD IT IS KAWAII!!!!!!! But I'd hafta say the most Kawaii on that (besides the one I sent you that you already had on it) is the one where they're stickig their tongues out. Well, I was gone all day at my Aunt's Birthday party...And I had quite a few Chibi's to look after myself!!!! My cousins Owen who's 3, HIS cousin's Nick and Andrew (3 and 4, I believe), and my other cousins Evan and Joseph (Twins, 1). They were insane, and I was about to KILL Nick cuz he kept punching me and just being a general ass. Owen, however, is the most polite child you'd ever meet. I spent the day watching Finding Nemo with them, playing Lilo and Stitch online games, and playing Elmo's Art Center. But when I WASN'T busy with the boys, I was drawing...A KAWAII PICTURE OF YOU AND YOUR CHIBI ADOPTED SONS!!!!!! You were holding Goten and Trunks close while Trunks gave you bunny ears and Goten just waved. Again, no scanner, so now I'm replicating it onto the computer to send to you...So far I about 1/2 finished YOU, and you still look way too much like Gohan. I gave you the fang and it's Kawaii, but after I send you it if you want me to remove it I will. And despite the Chibi's MOVIE ELEVEN STILL SUCKS TERRIBLY. Ugh, worst than Movie #4!!!! At least 4 had the cute scene of Gohan whistling, Haiya Dragon dancing, and Piccolo screaming in pain...I have dat song, Kuchibue no Kimochi...And didn't you say that Super Kalltorraiyajin CAN'T go past Level 1, which was why 1 was stronger than Super Saiyajin 3? And does Super Kalltorraiyajin have glowing red eyebrows? You didn't tell me that. Do you really look like Gohan in real life? Interesting. Well, I'll be talking to you when I get out of school tomorrow (About 2:00 for me, so...11:00 AM for you ¬_¬...). It'll take me a few days to finish this new picture, so look forward to having by...I'd venture to say about Wednesday. I'm currently in the process of sending you an E-Mail, and since my computer is as slow as shit AND I attatched several pictures to it it's taken about 1/2 hour so far and it's not even 1/2 way done..."Oh Holy night the stars are brightly shi-ning this is the night of our dear Savior's birth...STILL listening to my Christmas CD, and I will continue to as long as possible...Well ja ne, and GOHAN ROCKS!!!!!! AND CHIBI'S ARE KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!

-- Anonymous, November 23, 2003

lol ^__________^""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" ok i can't be bothered reading all those posts but yeah anyway Goten is kawaii!!!!!

-- Anonymous, November 24, 2003

Describe yourself for the Doujinshii Ms. BAKA_CHAN!!!

And Suupaa Gohan 2, that's glowing red EYES! (not eyebrows) and you can add it in when I get really powered up if you want. It's just a concept.

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 24, 2003

And yes, at least in THAT story, Kalltorraiya-jin never go past level 1, that's why it's so powerful. And just abbreviate it "SKJ" it's just easier. And I have no idea if I look like Gohan in real life...I never noticed if I do...and hurry up with the picture of me and the Chibis! I wanna see it!!

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 24, 2003

Ya sorry "EYES" not "EYEBROWS"...I'm in Spanish III right now and I'm s'posta be doing research...AND ANGELGOTEN YOU ASSHOLE!!!!!! You came RIGHT TO this thread and didn't describe yourself!!!!!!!! I gotta know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Hell yeah there's so many posts here (Pretty much only Me and Yonk tho) but they're funny so READ THEM GOD DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!! Please...I need all da help I can get!!!! Well Ja, I gotta find out customs and traditions of Chile...

-- Anonymous, November 24, 2003

Yeah, I'll try to get Angel_Goten to come back later.

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 24, 2003

Yeah, please do, or this is going nowhere. And I THOUGHT it was a bit wierd for glowing red EYEBROWS...So I stand corrected. Well I'm home now (Only did about 1/2 of that research on Chile before...Yeah, I'm a bad child...JK ^_^), and I've been working on the you with you're Chibi's pic. Maybe I can send it tomorrow, rather than Wednesday. We'll see..."God rest ye merry gentlemen let nothing you dismay remember Christ our Savior was born on Christmas day to save us allfrom Satan's power when we had gone astray good tidings of comfort and joy comfort and joy oh tidings of comfort and joy..." WAIT A MINNIT!!!!!!! I thought YONK saved the CHIBI'S from Satan's power!!!!! JK, BLASPHEMY (Me, not you)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well I was joking...CHRISTMAS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!

PS-I think that's gonna temporarily replace my Gohan Rocks motto...I keep writing Christmas Rocks all over the whiteboards in school and all the teachers are getting pissed at me..."It's not even Thanksgiving!!!!!!" Oh shut the Hell up, Thanksgiving sucks, Christmas rocks, GET USED TO IT!!!!!!!!!! And on the news this morning it was announced that about 20 radio stations in the country are gonna play Christmas music 'till Christmas is over...ABOUT DAMN TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've only found one (105.1 Light Rock, but that's not coming in very well on my radio...DAMMIT!!!!!!!!)...Any input, Yonk? Have you heard any Christmas songs on the radio out there in California?

-- Anonymous, November 24, 2003

Yeah, there's this one station that is playing all Christmas songs, all the time! And I love it! And yeah, can't wait to sse my picture!! And did you get my E-Mail? Was I kawaii or was I kawaii?! And yes I DID save the Chibis from Satan's power, with some help from Angel_Goten of course! Finish that picture, fast! I wanna see my Chibis!!

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 24, 2003

well if you really want me to describe myself then fine lol...im like 5ft or something (153cm for you peoples that use cm although im not sure if you peeps do because yonk doesnt because its so UN AMERICAN) lol but yeah ^_______^"""""" ummmmmm i dyed my hair so i guess i just say what colour it is now? (lol) well anyway ok I have blue eyes, really curly long brown hair(which i dyed because its naturally strawberry blonde) and yeah... im a very confusing person lol (and there i described myself)

-- Anonymous, November 25, 2003

Thank you for FINALLY answering me, AngelGoten!!!!!!! And no, I didn't get your E-Mail yet Yonk. I think that something's wrong with it...When I went to send you the zillion pictures I had attached my Outbox got fucked up and now it freezes when I try to Re- send it, and even try to DELETE it!!!!!!!!! But yeah I'll see if I can get it. Well...DAMMIT I WISH I WAS IN CALIFORNIA!!!!!!!!!!!!! All I have is my God Damn Christmas CD (Which rocks, but it only has 36 songs...*sniff*...), and the Christmas radio station I found barely comes in in my car, LET ALONE at my frickin' house!!!!! Well anyways...Hmmmm, can't think of much else to say now. I'm in school right now, in the library s'posta be doing my English Radio in the 1930's project...It's powerpoint and is almost done...Duuuurr, Suupaa Gohan 2, NOBODY CARES!!!!!!!!!!! So yeah, just wanted to see if anyone (*cough cough* AngelGoten *cough cough*) responded. Well then I guess...Ja ne!

-- Anonymous, November 25, 2003

Cool, it's awesome here in California! It really is! And anyway, if you don't get my E-Mail can you send the Chibi background I made to Angel_Goten? Thanks! And pleeeeeaaaaassssssseeeee finish the picture, I wanna see it! Actually, as long as you are finished with it by Friday, I'll be fine!

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 26, 2003

mhm lol um where do you live Suupaa Gohan? la-de-da have you peeps just been talking about this doujinshi thingymabob? I can't be bothered reading all the posts and i love reading (im weird) ok la- de-da dont ask about me AND GOTEN ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-- Anonymous, November 26, 2003

Hey! Hello? Suupaa Gohan 2? It's 1:15 PM in Mass. right now, AREN'T YOU UP YET?!?!?! Well, I want my kawaii chibi picture. If I could send a blast of psychic (or psycho) mind energy that way, I would wake you up. But I'm not at that level yet-I mean, *ahem* people can't do stuff like that *ahem*-so just wake up soon and send me the picture!!!

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 26, 2003

OH! I almost forgot, Angel_Goten is supposed to be 7 in the story! That way if she's 5'0" then she won't seem so short!!! I seriously think that if Angel_Goten got on her knees I would have several Great Danes taller than her ^____^ !!! Laughs, sorry Angel_Goten can't help it, but I'm taller than you HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! But anyway, yeah. Chibis are kawaii, and...

Yonk: "Chibis? Are you up yet!"

Trunks and Goten: "...ZZZZZZ..."

Yonk: (walkes into the chibis bedroom)"Hey! It's almost 10:30 AM, will you two wake up!?"

Chibis: "Huh...I...zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..."

Yonk: "Awwwwww, how cute, I can't distub them..."

Yonk Ki blasts the bed from under them.

Chibis: "WAH!! WHAT THE HELL...WAS...that...zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..."

Yonk: "Grrrrr...I know!"

Yonk leans closer to Goten.

Yonk: "Goten, breaaaaaaakfaaaaaaaaaaast!"

Goten: "WHAT? WHERE, FOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!"

He streaks down into the kitchen.

Yonk: "Trunks, wake up."

Trunks: "I don't wanna get up."

Yonk: (faces the doorway and yells at the top of his lungs) "WOW GOTEN, I DIDN'T THINK YOU COULD GO SSJ 3 SO FAST!!!!"

Trunks: "WHAT THE? YAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!"

Trunks goes SSJ 2 and blows up half the house.

Goten: "EEEP! What was that?"

Goten runs up to investigate, he sees the explosion and goes SSJ 2 as well, anticipating danger.

The rest of the house is blown away.

Yonk looks to his right and sees SSJ2 Trunks flying towards him at top speed. He then looks to his left and sees SSJ2 Goten doing the same.

Yonk: "KUSSSSSSOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!"

BOOM!!

Trunks: "Hey, Goten you're not SSJ3!"

Goten: "Yeah, and you're not Buu reborn trying to blow us up, Trunks- kun!"

The chibis look over at Yonk.

Yonk: (battered, bruised, bleeding, and seriously pissed off) "Chibis...come here..."

Chibis: "Uh, oh!!!"

Yonk goes Super-Kalltorraiya-jin!

...

...

Later.

Goten: "Trunks-kun, I'm hungry!"

Trunks: "Shut up Goten, you can't be hungry! 'Tousan is pumping liquified senzu beans into your arm!"

Goten: "My, legs hurt."

Trunks: "I would yell at your BAKA-chan, but it hurts my ribs!"

Yonk: "And how are my bedridden, bandaged Chibis doing today?"

Trunks: "Fine...*sigh*."

Goten: "How long do we have to stay in bed, Otousan?"

Yonk: "Well, until you two feel better. I gotta fly up to Korin's to get some more Senzu, so just stay put until I get back."

Yonk flies out the door.

Trunks: "Is he gone, Goten?"

Goten: "(looks out the window) Yeah!"

In a flash of bedsheets, bandages, Gis, and purple and black hair, the Chibis get out of bed and get dressed.

Later.

Goten: "Whatsa 'Laxitive' Trunks-kun?"

Trunks: (walks up with a handful of bedsprings) "Just get it out of the medicine cabinet, I'll tell you later!"

Goten: "Hai..."

Later.

Yonk:(flies in with a bag of Senzu) "So, how are my Chibis doing?"

Chibis: (back in bed, undressed, badaged and looking perfectly innocent)"Fine, Otousan!"

Yonk: "Good!"

He walks downstairs.

Yonk: "Nani, my coke tastes strange today..."

Chibi laughter is heard from up the stairs...

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 26, 2003

Yonk, I HATE TO SLEEP. I WAS UP AT 6:30 AM BUT I *HAD TO GO TO SCHOOL*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry...But yeah I JUST finished the Chibi's and you, but my E-Mail isn't working...Gomen Nasai...I'll figure something out, don't worry. Cute story!!!!!!!! So...I think we need to plan a story of how MarQooz3 kidnaps Santa and me, you, and AngelGoten have to save Christmas!!!!!!!! And yes, AngelGoten, me and Yonk seem to be the only ones who post here and it's pretty much ALL about the Doujinshii!!!! C'mon, read this stuff!!!! It's pretty funny!!!! And since me and Yonk are always busy chatting NOBODY HAS EVER HELPED ME FOR THE REASON I POSTED THIS QUESTION-I NEED A WAY TO CONTINUE THE STORY OF RADDITZ GOING SSJ AND THE GUYS GOING TO A PARTY!!!!!!!! AND MY CHRISTMAS STORY!!!!!!!!! So yeah, sorry 'bout my E-Mail, Yonk...Well now I gotta work on a computer art of you as a Super Kalltorraiyajin (I THINK I FINALLY SPELLED IT RIGHT!) and one of AngelGoten...7, huh? Sheesh...Yeah, you ARE short!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Just kidding...Well I'll be back...

PS-CHRISTMAS ROCKS AND DOWN WITH THE RACIST BASTARDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-- Anonymous, November 26, 2003

Yeah, fix the E-Mail, I wanna see my picture!! And I'll see if I can write the Christmas story somtime this weekend but I'll have the idea later tonight. And don't ask why Angel_Goten is 7 in the story, but she is. And do you actually HAVE Movie 10 and 11? I don't care how much they suck I wanna see them!!!! If it's really that bad then I can just Fast-Forward past all the boring parts straight to the Chibi parts!! And anyway, do you ever watch DBZ Music Videos? Some of them are pretty good. So anyway, fix the E-Mail now! And Domo Arigato for drawing me! Ja ne...

-Yonk

-- Anonymous, November 26, 2003

Sorry 'bout the E-Mail, Yonk. I'll TRY ta fix it...But since there is not SCANNER I was gonna do both drawing your "Wake Up Chibi's" li'l story (THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!) AND "draw" one on the computer with GIF sprites!!!!!!!!! But right now I have to modify a Mystic Gohan sprite sheet (Hyper Dimension, yes I have Sprite Sheets for almost every character, mainly from Hyper Dimension and the Super Budouten Series) into YOU, with the brown hair and the Ninja Gi I gave you. I HAFTA SEND YOU THAT IMAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll find a way to fix it, BUT I CAN'T BE SURE IT'LL BE BY THE END OF THE WEEK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~~~~~~~~~~~~HHHHHHHHHHHKKKKKKKK!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Pulls hair out* Well anyways...And no, I DON'T HAVE those movies...my computer is as slow as shit and it takes me AN HOUR to download a song...But back in 8th grade I downloaded all the movies and tons of da episodes (Which is how I saw Japanese DBZ with crappy fansubs before I knew any Japanese, AND before FUNimation began to sell those wonderful DVD's). Sorry...I dunno if the site still has 'em, but I usta get them all from www.dbgt.com's multimedia section. I haven't gone to that site in a long time because it had been down, but it's back up. Like I said, they may not still have the movies...Sor-ry...And I liked Movie #10!!!! I dunno why everyone says it sucks-It totally caught me off guard when *SPOILER!!!!!!! DON'T READ IF YA DON'T WANT THE MOVIE RUINED!!!!!!!! * Goten asked Shenlong for help and Gokou's ghost appeared-I figured Shenlong would just vanquish Brolli. Plus when Trunks pisses on Brolli's head IS SOOOOOO FUNNY!!!!!!! *END SPOILER, CONTINUE READING* But Movie #11 is TOTAL shit. Well I gotta finish up...South Park is coming on soon...An old one and THE NEW ONE THAT SOUNDS FUNNY-THANKSGIVING SPECIAL!!!!!!!! If you get Comedy Central out there, REALLY you should watch South Park. My fave non- Anime "cartoon", and same with Futurama and Family Guy. Ja ne!

PS-Chistmas Rocks, AND DOWN WITH THE RACIST BASTARDS!!!!!!!!!!

-- Anonymous, November 26, 2003