"Emerald Sunrise" fanfic/doujinshi

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I'm in the middle of drawing an American fan doujinshi titled "Emerald Sunrise". Anyone know of any good websites I can post it on?

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 09, 2003

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How big is it??? If its not too big, why not post it here for a while???

-- )v(ajin\/egita (info@smserve.co.za), December 09, 2003.

I've done about six to seven chapters on the writing of it, but the drawings are still in the beggining stage. I guess I could give everyone a small sample of "Emerald Sunrise", that is, if you got a LOT of time and patience.

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 09, 2003.

[b]"Emerald Sunrise[/b]

He returns! The most diabolical fiend returns with an all-new scheme! No longer content with trying to do in a lovely heiress for her vast fortune, The Hooded Claw aspires for nothing less than global conquest! His first target is the girl genius Ami Mizuno! But standing in his path are The Sailor Senshi and one other, a hero who patrols the stars.... The Green Lantern!!!

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 09, 2003.


Aren't you on the anarchy forums??? Is there more???

-- )v(ajin\/egita (info@smserve.co.za), December 10, 2003.

Yes. To both questions.^^ Since the trolls have been posting their racist and sick sex crap under other people's name and E-mail addresses, if there is a gay porn posting under my name, don't believe it. It's the postings of one of the perverted trolls who destroyed the Animes forum like the cowards they really are.

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 10, 2003.


Sweet! Good luck for you. I'm making my own Dragonball Doujinshii, and I even posted a thread about it once in the Anime forum that the racist bastards were responsible for the demise of. Too much detail for me to go into about now, but it's not a really lame American Fanmanga as I use right-to-left format, Japanese titles and sound effercts, and the fact that I only watch Japanese DBZ...Cuz dubbed sucks but that's another story...So sorry I don't know where you can post it, but good luck!! Also, what Anime/Manga is it based on, if any?

PS-CHRISTMAS ROCKS!!!!!

-- Suupaa Gohan 2 (dragonballz@aol.com), December 10, 2003.


Ford, do you have more of that fan manga??? Why not post a little bit more about it. I would like to see more of it.

-- )v(ajin\/egita (info@smserve.co.za), December 10, 2003.

Ford, I think somebody is impersonaing you again. Just check out the Dr Katz post in the anarchy forums. Fuck those bastards!!!

-- MajinVegita (dbz4@thevortex.com), December 11, 2003.

That just proves our point about those assholes. Here's hoping the moderators delete or alter their posts as to expose the bastards for the trash they really are. ><

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 11, 2003.

By the way, "Emerald Sunrise" is a hybrid alternate universe/crossover fanfic based on "Bishojo Senshi Sailor Moon", some Ameican cartoons fom the late '60's and '70's, and the American comic book series "Green Lantern". I'll also throw in the Good Guys from "Dragonball Z" and "Justice League".^^

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 11, 2003.


Chapter One: "In Brigthest Day"

Garret Harold Jordan is starting his first day at a new school overseas, Jubaan Junior High. He arrived a bit differently from the other students, as evidenced by the fading green aura around his body as he landed on the campus!! Being the only African-American on campus is distinction enough, but having THE most powerful weapon in the Universe also make him stand out. Overhead and unseen by most is Gohan, riding on his cloud,smiling and waving to Garret. Garret waves back returning the smile. As he enters the building, Garret meets a lady with auburn hair and blue eyes. She was also wearing a red dress. Garret recognizes her. "Sensei Haruna, I presume?" asks Garret politely. Miss Haruna smiles and answers "Yes. I take it that you're the new exchange student from America?" "I am. I'm Garret Harold Jordan from High Point, North Carolina. It's an honor and a pleasure to meet you Miss Haruna." Miss Haruna blushes as she smiles. "I'll guide you to the auditorium where you can meet the rest of the students and faculty. Garret was introduced to the rest of the student body. "Everyone, this is Garret Harold Jordan from America. He and his family have just moved her to the Jubaan prefecture. Please make him feel right at home." smiles Sensei Haruna.

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 11, 2003.


Not bad. When do we see more???

-- MajinVegita (dbz4@thevortex.com), December 11, 2003.

Saturday. I'll be at my Sunday School class' Christmas party.

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 11, 2003.

Everyone in the audutorium was smiling. One of the students was a girl with blonde hair rolled up in two long pigtails with two balls on top of her head, and blue eyes. She walks over to Garret and introduces herself. "Hi! My name is Usagi Tsukino! Welcome to Jubaan Junior High! Let me show you around." Usagi takes Garret by his right hand and takes him on a whirlwind tour of the school. Garret thinks to himself "Great Guardians! Usagi's a one-girl welcome wagon!!" Usagi, with Garret in tow, heads for the classrom to which Garret is assigned, Usagi's class! On the way, they reach the one place Usagi seldom visits...the library. Then, Garret sees a girl with blue-black hair and the prettiest blue eyes that he's ever seen! Garret's nose suddenly gushed out blood!! Usagi gasps in surprise and begins to giggle. Garret was thinking the words "Helloooooooooooooooooooooooooo Nurse!!!!" Garret regains his composure long enough for introductions. Usagi introduces Garret to her. "Ami-chan, this is Garret Jordan from America. Garret-kun, this is my friend Ami Mizuno." Usagi was smiling. Garret smiled at Ami. "It's a pleasure to meet you Ami." Ami was smiling and blushing. "It is a pleasure to meet you too Garret. I see you met Usagi-chan." comments Ami. "Indeed. Usagi has quite a lot of energy. You'd have to have warp drive to keep up with her." comments Garret. Usagi was laughing along with the two.

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 13, 2003.

NICE. I'll ask the infamous qeustion once again. When do we see more???

-- )v(ajin\/egita (info@smserve.co.za), December 13, 2003.


Hopefully tomorrow. IF the library is open. That's where I log on. I DON'T have a computer of my own.... yet.

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 13, 2003.

Now I can understand. The racist pictures might be a problem in the library, nê???

-- )v(ajin\/egita (dbz4@thevortex.com), December 13, 2003.

You bet! That's another reason why I HATE those sick bastards! Speaking as a Human being, I would love to see every one of those racist shits tortured and put to death for their crimes on the Internet.

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 14, 2003.

YEAH!!! I'd pay to se that!!!! And now they are starting to impersonate me!!!! I HATE THEM!!!!!

PS: Does anybody have a problem with my english???

-- )v(ajin\/egita (dbz4@thevortex.com), December 14, 2003.


Don't worry. Even if not painfully tortured in life, their souls are in the hands of the Lord and he will surely not forgive crimes against humanity like that (Even if it is just posting nasty images and racism on Anime boards). So we can all rest assured on that. Well...GOHAN ROCKS!!!!!!!

PS_AND SO DOES CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!!!! CHRISTMAS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!

-- Suupaa Gohan 2 (dragonballz@aol.com), December 14, 2003.


I have no problem with your English. ^^ At least YOU can speak it, I don't know about X-lax though. That loser is one sick piece of work. That idiot can't even form sentences right let alone act like he's at least older than two years old.

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 14, 2003.

Yep, Suupaa Gohan 2 is right (again), their lives are in the hands of The Lord. The certainly won't get away with this once they die.

X-lax is an idiot. I won't be surprised if he has some sort of brain diseas or something.I know I shouldn't listen to what he says, but is my english really that bad???(I don't think so, I've seen Americans use English worse)

PS: No No No, VEGETA ROCKS!!!!!!

-- )v(ajin\/egita (dbz4@thevortex.com), December 14, 2003.


YOU MUST CAPITALIZE THE WORD LORD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND GOHAN KUN ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE'D KICK VEGETA'S ASS ANYDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Random thought-Why do you spell it "Vegita" in your name but as talking about the actual CHARACTER you spell Vegeta? Just curious. And just so you all know...When I spell crap wrong it's usually on purpose. If I don't know how to spell something I write (Spelling?) next to it. I mean purposely doing it like writing "Cuz" "Tho" "Da" and stuff like that, as well as "Prob'ly" and "'Cept". And also...

PS-CHRISTMAS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOHAN DECKED THE HALLS WITH VEGETA'S ENTRAILS!!!!!!!! Just kidding, can't we all get along and agree THAT GOHAN ROCKS?

-- Suupaa Gohan 2 (dragonballz@aol.com), December 14, 2003.


You're both right! Both characters ROCK!!!^^ I may not be a DBZ fan, but I like the characters in DBZ. It's the editing in the English dubbed version that ruined it for everyone. But please DON'T get me started on how the FCC and DiC(k) practically destroyed "Sailor Moon", we'd be here all year! ^^()

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 14, 2003.

There, I fixed it. Sorry. Was typing to fast to keep up. WE CAN"T GET ALONG UNTILL EVERYBODY ADMITS THEY LIKE VEGETA MORE THAN GOHAN!!! If Vegeta wanted to, he can kick gohan's ass anyday. I don't think either is wrong, so I like to variate. I like my characther as Vegita, but I speak of him as Vegeta.

I've got couple of qeustions:

Who is stronger between Mystic Gohan and SSJ3 Goku.

And who is stronger between Kidbuu and and Superbuu3(with Gohan, picollo, trunks and goten).

And who is the strongest in the end of dbz???

-- )v(ajin\/egita (dbz4@thevortex.com), December 14, 2003.


Sorry Ford. Forgot this was your post on the Emerald Sunrise" fanfic/doujinshi. Don't mind us. Just post it when you have your new one ready.

-- )v(ajin\/egita (dbz4@thevortex.com), December 14, 2003.

It's not a problem.^^

Another girl arrived on the scene. She was taller than Usagi and Ami, her auburn hair was tied in a pony-tail, and green eyes. She was wearing a different school uniform from Usagi and Ami. Usagi introduces her. "Garret-kun, this is my friend Makoto Kino. Mako- chan, this is Garret Jordan from America. He's the new student here." Usagi was grinning. Makoto was smiling. "Glad to meet you Garret- kun." "I'm glad to meet you Mako-chan." replies Garret, smiling. "We should get to class or Sensei Haruna will have our hides." says Makoto. The four of them get to class on time. During the lesson, Usagi and Makoto discover that Ami and Garret have a few things in common with each other. For one, the both have IQs in the 300 range! Usagi and Makoto just sit in amazement. Sensei Haruna's jaw dropped in surprise and shock! "I'm dealing with ANOTHER super-genius!!" Ami was surprised and delighted! Another thing the two have in common was they both love to read! Usagi nudges Makoto. "Looks like Ami-chan has a rival. Or boyfriend." Makoto nods in agreement. They were both grinning from ear to ear.

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 14, 2003.


Garret, like Ami, also plays sports. Basketball (think of him as another Michael "Air" Jordan!^^), baseball, chess, is an extremely skilled acrobat, and he swims like a fish! Makoto says to Usagi "He's the perfect match for Ami-chan." After school, Usagi invites Garret to go with them to the Crown Fruits parlor and Video Archade. "Garret, how about joining us at the video archade?" she asks. Garret replies "Sounds like a plan. OK, I'm there!" "Great! Then it's a date!" They head for the Crown Fruits Parlor and Video Archade. When they arrived, two other girls met them. One had long black hair and purple eyes. She was wearing a Catholic Schoolgirl's uniform. The other girl was nearly a dead ringer for Usagi, except that her blonde hair wasn't quite as long as Usagi's, and she is wearing a different school uniform. Her blonde hair was tied in a red ribbon. Garret thinks to himself "Great Guardians! I must have died and gone to Heaven because I'm seeing angels!" Usagi introduces them to Garret. "Garret-kun, these are my other two friends. The one with the long black hair is Rei Hino. She goes to an all-girl's Catholic school. She's an ace at Archery. the other girl with the red ribbon is Minako Aino. She goes to a different school from us. Rei-chan, Minako-chan, this is Garret Jordan from America. He's the new student at our school. Garret smiles as he shakes Rei's hand. "It's a pleasure to meet you Rei. And you too Minako." Rei and Minako smile. suddenly, Rei has a psychic vision! It was of a guy in a green and black costume with white gloves and boots, battling a gang of monsters, and beating them!! The vision abruptly ends. "Rei, are you all right? Is ther something wrong?" asked a concerned Garret. Startled, Rei replies "N..Nothing. I'm all right." Rei grinned sheepishly. Usagi wasn't so sure. She knows Rei well enough to know something was wrong. Rei was a little embarrased by the vision, but she sensed something about Garret. A power just waiting to be used. Rei smiles and asks "What's that in your left hand Garret?" Garret produces a rose. Garret was blushing a little. "Ami, this is for you. A lovely flower, for a lovely flower." Blushing and smiling, Ami accepts the rose. "Why, thank you Hal!" Minako elbows Usagi gently. "Ami-chan's blushing. Is this her lucky day or what?" whispers Minako to Usagi. Usagi nods, grinning from ear to ear.

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 15, 2003.

Quote by Majin Vegita- "There, I fixed it. Sorry. Was typing to fast to keep up. WE CAN"T GET ALONG UNTILL EVERYBODY ADMITS THEY LIKE VEGETA MORE THAN GOHAN!!! If Vegeta wanted to, he can kick gohan's ass anyday. I don't think either is wrong, so I like to variate. I like my characther as Vegita, but I speak of him as Vegeta."

DAMN YOU MAJIN VEGETA!!!!!!!!!!!!! TAKE IT BACK!!!!!!!!!!! TAKE IT BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You KNOW damn well that Gohan could kick his ass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Vegeta sucks!!!!!!!!!!! VEGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He COULD kick Buu Saga Gohan's ass, but NOT SSJ2 Gohan!!!!!!!!!!! I believe Vegeta even said at the end of my favorite episode, #184 "Juuroku no Muzan!! Umokitasuri Ikari no SUUPAA Gohan", the following-"What? Those little monsters we were struggling against...In ONE hit?" Vegeta FEARED SSJ2 Gohan- Kun's power and you know it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's not fair that Gohan became a wussy in the Buu Saga, but SSJ2 Gohan kicks Vegeta's ass anyday of the week!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW ADMIT IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PS-CHRISTMAS ROCKS, SOSHITE ORE NO GOHAN KUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-- Suupaa Gohan 2 (dragonballz@aol.com), December 17, 2003.


You fear the unkown. Vegeta didn't know what Gohan was capable of. Its like a normal saiyan fearing a super saiyan. He doesnt know what the ssj is capable of, because he never saw it before, and never experienced it himself. That being said, if Vegeta really wanted to, he could have kicked Gohan's ass!!!

-- )v(ajin\/egita (Info@smserve.co.za), December 17, 2003.

Then they all heard a scream! As they rushed towards the door of the archade, they were greeted with a startling sight. Two older teenage boys were pulling the hair of a little girl in an elementary schoolgirl's uniform. She had pink hair done in a hairstyle similar to Usagi's. "Chibi Usa!!!" exclaims Usagi. Ami gasps in shock. How could these boys be so cruel to little Chibi Usa?? Garret growls "Oh yeah. Someone is definitely tired of breathing." Garret was furious!! Before anyone could stop him, he was charging to Chibi Usa's defense!

One of the two bullies was a blonde with beady black eyes, wearing black shorts, white socks, black tennis shoes, a dark blue T-shirt with the words "Death Rock" written in red. (Beavis. ><) His associate was a brunette with smaller, beadier black eyes, similarly attired as Beavis, but his T-shirt was gray with the words "AC-DC" written in yellow. (Butt-Head.><)

Garret grips Beavis by his left shoulder and spins him around to face him. Garret then catches him flatfooted with a meaty round-house right!! The punch sends Beavis flying into the wall of the arcade! Garret then nails Butt-Head with a powerful uppercut that takes him off of his feet and deposits him on his back!! Picollo, Gohan, and Vegeta appear to lend a hand, but Picollo hold the other two back. "Look who's getting their butts kicked, and get a load of who's doing the kicking!" grins Picollo. Gohan and Vegeta break out in wide grins as well. The three of them just sit down and watch the battle. Makoto wanted to join in the fight, but it wasn't necessary. Garret grabs Beavis by his right wrist and armwhips him into Butt-Head! Picollo, Vegeta and Gohan just sit there and laugh!! Beavis and Butt- Head try to leave, but run right into a trash can! Garret quips "Whoa. Dumber than advertised!" All six girls laugh, as does the three Dragonball Z fighters. Beavis and Butt-Head finally manage to get themselves out of the trash can, only to run into a double clothesline from Garret! The two punks get up rather shakily. Vegeta grins and says "Here it comes.." Garret muses "The cobra strikes." He nails Beavis with a devastating tornado-kick to the right jaw while he demolishes Butt-Head with a spinning back-fist to the face!! The two trouble-makers collasped in two heaps at Garret's feet. The Dragonball Z Fighters clap for Garret while the six girls cheered!! "Pathetic! My great-grandmother could fight better than these two, and she's been dead for over twenty years!" mutters Garret. At that, the Dragonball Z Fighters laugh and cheer for GArret! Gohan and Vegeta give Garret the "thumb's up" signal. Picollo grins and nods.

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 18, 2003.


Great!!! When do we see more??? And where did the Z Fighters pop out of all of a sudden???

-- )v(ajin\/egita (Info@smserve.co.za), December 18, 2003.

They were flying overhead and landed close to The Crown Fruits Parlor and Video Arcade and decided to check up on Garret, just to say "Hi".^^ And also to help Garret beat the crap out of Beavis and Butt-Head, even though Garret easily wiped the street with those two morons.^^ (Forgot to write that in.^^())

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 18, 2003.

Ok, so they know Garret. Is this Garret based on you???

-- )v(ajin\/egita (Info@smserve.co.za), December 19, 2003.

Not really, but he IS based on several guys who bore and do bear the mantle of The Green Lantern. I only used my middle name for the character's first name, Harold, or "Hal" as Ami would call him later on, as his middle name. (Hal Jordan, John Stewart, Guy Gardner, Alan Scott, and Kyle Rayner. THE Big Five Green Lanterns.^^)

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 19, 2003.

Usagi and the others ran over to Garret, who was seeing to Chibi Usa. "Are you all right?" he asks. Chibi Usa replies "I'm Ok. Thanks!" She whispers to Usagi "Who is this guy?" Usagi whispers back "Chibi Usa, meet Garret Jordan. He's the new guy at our school." Ami walks quickly to Garret. "Hal, where did you learn how to fight like that?" she asks. "My granndad trained me in the basics of hand- to-hand combat. The Z Fighters helped with the rest. My granddad was a Colonel in the US Marine Corps, Special Forces. He retired to become a police officer. He's now the Police Commissioner for this prefecture. Grandma is the District Court Judge. Mom is now a teacher at Jubaan Elementaty. Dad is the new District Attorney here. I want to be a policeman like my granddad." replies Garret, blushing a little.

Ami was smiling. "Hal, you're a rarity these days, like the Z Fighters.. a knight in shining armor. Thank you!" Ami then kisses Garret on the right cheek! He blushes and says "S-s-s-s-smokin'!!!" Garret's nose spurts out a stream of blood! The Z Fighters grin. Garret didn't even use the ring!

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 19, 2003.


I'll post some more after the Holidays are over. I'm still battling the racist jerks and the other idiots impersonating me in other bords.

-- Garret Ford (Parallax281457689@Yahoo.com), December 24, 2003.

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