ONE OF MY LATEST.

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This is one of my latest writings...

soon to be on my website, and later in a bound volume with others , as of the end of the Year.

I havent offered it a proepr title, but here it is anyway.Tell me what you think.

-------------------------------------------- 1:No one to care fo you... nor to love you, nor to see you, you are alone, in fear and darkness, in sorry and greif...

2:The Abyss overtakes you, the cold void envelopes you, and you cry out, to no avail, no sound can be uttered, and you are alone...

3: regrets, fears, doubts, and guilt, all creep steadily within, cloudign all else, till all is blotted out...

4: the haze of memories fade, but the feeligns remain, always to remind of sorrows logn past, and a future ,most misurable...

5:bleakness and drought, haze and couuds, sadness an suffering, are the preasent, compose the past, and foreshadow the futre...

6:inward you turn, and inward you fall, spiriling down into an oblivion, aling the way creaching out, feelign compelled, out of controle...

7: Hope seems far removed, indeed it seems hopeless, life is so useless, your thoughts so abysmal, then the light shines through.

8: One sees what one is becoming, one sees the void, and how one feeds it... then, one stepps away...

9: The light of God shones ever brighter, and though our minds are in turbulent Darkness, the Lord is always a beacon of rescue.

-- ZAROVE (ZAROFF3@JUNO.COM), August 11, 2004

Answers

ANOTHER, just so I dont have to say Bumo and make it useless...Their is no room then fo me, or a dream of the past I see... a ruined life, a shattered hope, a dream lost on the bring of madness now reflected in the pools of memory.

Deep in that mind of osrrows, my inactiosn and mh fears collided to cause shame and reproach, and sin hath convicted me then, and I seek restoration, but find none.

I turn then to God, and see this last great hope, a feelign of belongiug, a sence of pourpose, I look back, and still though feel my past, and find myself imprisoned... I cry, and he hears me.

-- ZAROVE (ZAROFF3@JUNO.COM), August 11, 2004.


Beautiful words that speak from the heart Zarove. I personally look forward to the rest. Don't forget to post the link when you get the chance.

-- Andy S ("ask3332004@yahoo.com"), August 12, 2004.

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