SAMERES REAWAKENING, CHAPTER TWO

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Chapter two of the Sameres Reawakening is below, pleae tlel me wghat you think...And I apologise for Hcapter oen beign en runon paragrpag... the problem was Greenspun crunched it liek it did "There made out of meat"...

-- ZAROVE (ZAROFF3@JUNO.COM), January 19, 2005

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The Ship moved fast in Space… the small Miranda Class vessel, outdated now, and among the last still in operation, having been given a slight reprise by the Federation’s lack or resources to build new ships and need for ships after the Dominion war… but that was over a decade ago, and no one doubted this ship was on her last days. She also showed signs of her age.

The outer Hull looked tired, worn and Grey… with weathered Nacelles clinging to a slightly dented saucer.

The name was seen across the top, in Faded black paint that seemed itself thin, and Grey-blue more than Black, as the ship edged toward a distant point in the region… that name was Elonna … the NCC-2203... One of the last Miranda’s launched.

Within, in a small science lab, one of the secondary stations, they’re sat a small Dinosauroid woman…

She wore a vest, and a blue shirt underneath, and seemed busy with a Neutron microscope…

Her pale blue skin shined exotically as she readjusted the readings, then, it caught her attention…she had been studying it for over the last three hours, and now, at last, she had it. Isolated.

“Yes” she said, as she stood up, and began to rush to the bridge, with a small Data pad in hand.

On the Bridge stood a rather austere looking Captain, A Human… with broad shoulders and a thick, brown beard. He wore a standard black and grey duty Uniform.

“Captain” said the Dinosauroid, as she proceeded “ If I may…”

The Captain spoke, “Mr. Williams, what is our current heading and speed.”

Williams addressed the Captain “ Heading 114.7.9.5 sir, speed at full Impulse.”

The Captain turned around, only to hear the Dinosauroid Female stutter again with “Excuse…excuse me sir…I have something important to…”

The Captain manoeuvred himself into his chair, and looked back at the Helm…” Prepare for warp jump on my signal…” away he looked to the Communications officer “ Any incoming signals form Command.” he asked the Andorian woman at the COM post. “Negative sir.” she replied.

“Excuse me, Captain, before we go to Warp, you may wan to look over these readings, they are very interesting.” Said She.

“Ensign Latria Elmoon, why are you taking liberties on my ship by storming my bridge to hand me your research? You are only an Ensign and nowhere near the Command position. You report straight to the Chief Science officer.” He said, with curt dismissal. “But, But sir, I needed to…” she stammered.

“Needed to what?” he barked, continuing to berate her “ Needed to barge into my busy day, and trouble me with your latest small findings that are trivial?”

“Trivial?” she said, appalled, and then she said, “ Before we go to warp, we need to examine these readings, we are on a science mission after all and they may be important.”

“What are they” commanded the Captain. “ They are our latest subspace and hyperspace readings, sir, they report an unusual amount of ambient energy, this may prove a means of preparing space after warp effects, and even work as a secondary power source if we learn to use it right. I have been doing this research for over the last month now and…”she was cut off with “ if it was that important, my Chief science officer would have learned it before you, Mr. Williams, make ready for warp factor…” she broke her captain off…” Sir no, look, It’s all right here…I just need a few more days to collect the Data,”

He snatched the Pad out of her hand. Looked it over, as she sat for over 4 minuets. “Allright, you have 12 hours, assemble a small staff, then we plot course to Aeika. “ Said the Captain Firmly. “12 Hours? Sir it will take longer than that to…” she said as she was interrupted. Then he retorted, “12 hours, take it or leave it.” She then anted to say something else, argue her case, but she knew it was useless, and wasn’t one for confrontation, so she meagrely said “Aye Captain.” She stiffened up… and asked “ Permission to get started now sir.”

“Permission Granted” he said, as she turned, and started to walk away, he slapped her on her rear, she jumped, as the male Lt. Commander, another Human, snickered at her alarmed reaction, embarrassed and angry, she heard the Captain say “Snap to it, Ensign.” She fled the bridge; the Turbolift door swooshed open, then closed as she heard four of the men laughing at her unease…

But at least she got what she wanted… a chance to explore the regions unusual energy readings……

Still, she didn’t like the Captain, or his rude, sexist, derogatory bullying. Nor his Rude manner. The Turbolift door swung open, and she hurried to her lab, to make preparations for the new mission, she couldn’t waste time.


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